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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story, would love to read more...
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh gods...Update!!!... I love this story... and that's hard for me... I normally criticize anything that has words within it. Sigh. Good job.
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December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
your story is great but when are you going to update???????
please update soon!
please update soon!
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December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i want to know what happen better hurry up im going yo go mad i need to know now thank u >;p
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October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i really like this
and i think you are doing a fine job w/ kagome
seems pretty dead on so far
and i think you are doing a fine job w/ kagome
seems pretty dead on so far
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October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great job! Can't wait to read more
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October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed these two chapters very much. I think I need to go take a nice LONG and VERY COLD shower now. hehe. I would actually be interested in archiving this fic on my website. The address is: http://www.angelfire.com/anime5/fanfics_in_the_night
There isn't a whole lot there yet, but I'm working on it. Feel free to go check it out and then get back to me.
Oh, back to my review. I caught a few spelling mistakes and grammar errors, but nothing so horrible that it drew away from the fic in itself. On a scale of 1 to 10, I give this fic a 8 easy. Keep up the good work, and don't let idiots that don't know what they're talking about discourage you from continuing to write.
Later - Crash, a.k.a. broken_angel, a.k.a. Black Raven of Death
There isn't a whole lot there yet, but I'm working on it. Feel free to go check it out and then get back to me.
Oh, back to my review. I caught a few spelling mistakes and grammar errors, but nothing so horrible that it drew away from the fic in itself. On a scale of 1 to 10, I give this fic a 8 easy. Keep up the good work, and don't let idiots that don't know what they're talking about discourage you from continuing to write.
Later - Crash, a.k.a. broken_angel, a.k.a. Black Raven of Death
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October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think you do quite well in characterizing Kagome. Most of the time, she's a cheerful, optimistic girl, and has a big heart. That's why (I think) she wants so desperately to piece the Shikon back together. People are suffering, and she feels she's partly the blame. I really liked this chapter, and the plot. I hope you'll update soon (or at least sooner than before ^_^)!
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October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i juss wuv ur fic...update soon
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October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON! This story I hope keeps moving right on! GREAT STORY!!