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by Miara

person Megan Consoer
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^ I love it so far! I also really love the VB disclaimers! I was like..."Is that what I think it is?.... IT IS LOL!" I wonder if ealleally works though....Hmmmm.....

Anyhoo back to the story...As for insight to Kagome? I haven't a clue as I need more chapters to figure it out myself. But the story is progressing very well.. I feel a bit sorry for Inu and Kagome, but...Sesshoumaru is the one to start the mess...and Kagome too...She could have said no, but...I think it was a heady feeling for Kagome that someone ( anyone ) wanted her for herself, and not because she resembled someone e And And because she gave into those feelings, in a moment of supreme weakness ( which I can't blame her for cause had that been me I probably would have done the same thing, only I would have told Inuyasha to his face and to stick it where the sun don't shine ) she let Sesshoumaru...Ummm....It wasn't a mating but still thats what I want to call it...so for the sake of argument, thats what I'll call it otherwise someone says so...I know how I can put it! * grins evilly * She let Sesshoumaru have his way with her! There! Thats it! ^_^ * pats self on shoulder and wrenches it * ;_; Anyhoo....I think I just gave you some insight....O.o I guess I just needed to start writing to think it through...

Anyhoo....Good story...Keep up the good work! ^_^ Until next time! ^_^

person Pallas
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I do still have hope that you'll continue this fic! I would love to know what happens next! Update, please??
person Pallas
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you haven't forgotten about this fic! Please update??
person sesshomarus_mistress
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh come on why the cilfy when will you up date again i need to know what happens please please!!!!!
person monkeygirl
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, write more!
I can't wait until the next chapter, hurry and please updated soon!
person Tara
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just have to tell you - I've read lots and LOTS and lots of fanfiction. Here, on ff.net, on mm.org and at least a dozen other smaller sites. But this story is my new favorite of all of them. As much as I like mindless smut - a smutty story that leaves you hanging on the edge of your seat wanting more is so much better. I think you are an outstanding writer and if you aren't currently writing for a living you should give some serious thought to it.

person Shinna
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a really interesting fanfic. Can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon
person jax
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and hope you continue to update!!!! =) u will be updating, won't u??? PLEASE!!!! =)~
person xellosalina
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update this. it is not often that i bed for an update but i am begging now.