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Wow this is so good. Yeah i'm a bit freaked out by Sessies's actions. If he still loves Ume, why'd he even think of taking another mate. It's obvious he wo eve ever forgive Inuyasha. Poor Sessie, alone in the world, def def. not helping himself. Why! *sniff*

lol ummm ya thinking Sesshy may be losing it a bit, arguing wif a tree hehe anyhow I sooo love this keep going and please update soon k?? ty ty

I love all original stuff. I like this piece quite well, but I think the female that Sesshomaru was in love with that set him on his path of resentment of Inuyasha should have been a fellow demon. My reason being that I would find it hard to believe that he could love a human and turn around and call them weaklings. I think if he loved another demon and her life was loss as a result of trying to protect a human (Weakling) that would infuriate him more. Anyways overall good job.

alrighty chapter two.... But I am a little confussed.... did we speed up now now....Now it is how many years later...How old was Inuyasha when it all happened???? Just trying to keep up.... So far, I really enjoy the plot.... I love the fact that Sesshoumaru had loving feelings for Inu at one point... Keep going....

ooh this is very very good and I want to read more..so please update soon k?? pretty please?..ty ty ty

WOW... starting out Deep... Now come on, come on....we need more....

Very creative. I can't wait to see where this goes!!!