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for The Maid!

by stayingput29

person hyg
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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person Mija
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
damn horney Inu..hehe but ya gotta luv him..and omg the whole scene with Verokie and Lulu was priceless, this was a totally fun and wonderfull chapter I luved it alot, it is good to play everynow and then and those two are a hoot..and Sess..awwwwww his ice is melting..he better watch it or he may find himself actually smiling a real smile for once..hehe..anyway another great chap I totally luved it ty for updating and hope to read another chap soon hint hint..hehe till laters Mules gf be well and safe and happy much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person Mija
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oooh Mules gf this chap is soooooooo totaly cool, and if you being like you and I are now..hehe wink..snickers..then you are truely a great writer..hehe...if you can write great chaps normal and ummm a bit off normal..lol..again snickers ya know what I mean..hehe..and no you others who may read this its nothing wierd or anything just a little joke betwone one of my fav authors and me..as well as a very cool friend..:-) anyhow again its great I wish I could do this on the weekends...lol..but alas you know I dont have that ability..hehe again good chap luv it much, till we talk next time as well as always huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person Mija
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh I think this was a great chapter!...and umm for the writers block??? dont think I sent it to ya since I still have it mys.lol.lol...dont ya just hate that??? anyhow I think you did a terrific job with this chap writers block and all..I luved it..and ooh I cant wait to see what surprises Ash holds for Inu and Sesshy..hehe this is going to be good :-) till then and always you be safe well and happy gf and hope the writers block goes away soon I know hotheothersome that is..with much hug and and smiles Mija..:-)
person Mija
schedule September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh me liked..i loved this chap..finally got on this site, but dont know how long it will last..lol..it has a habit of booting me off..anyhow I just wanted to say how much I love this chap, I knew Ash was Sesshy's brother..hehe I loved that..and awwwwww soo glad Kagome and Inu made up..and how Sesshy looked concerned over Lulu?? that was just priceless I soo cant wait to read your next chap soo update soon k?? please?? pretty please?? ty ty ty huggs and much smiles Mija..:-)
person Mija
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh man way creepy..all those girls being drained of blood to be skinned?? (shivers) and Im an Ice Goddess?? hehe I love it..you soo kind Mules..(grins happily) but wonder shy Myoga is soo enchated wif me..lol..god I love this chap as I have the rest and cant wait to read the next one soo update soon K?? ummm btw..so Ash is the real Crystal Master and not Diamond??? hmmmm I like that...hehe update soon k?? ty ty ty with much smiles and huggs Mija..:-)
person Shell
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I would say a cliffy... And wow loved this chapter as I have all of them... Ash and Sessy working together this can only get better... and He is the true Crystal Master.... very interesting... Keep it up and post again soon...ty ty ty
person Shell
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Lulu she just can't catch a break... And Ash I can't believe he isn't going after the one he loves, what is in it for Sesshoumaru becouse she is the only one to help him find the deary... Oh yea I love the bug(guy) Flitter... Cute name... Good chapter... hope to see a new one soon....
person Mija
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh you updated this story..YAY!..this is totally one of my favs and Im soo glad you updated..this was a great chap as all the others were..:-) and poor Ash..he cares for Lulu, but can do nothing to help her, he has to rely on Sessy to do it all, and I hope Sessy does, for just a moment there he actually sounded concerned for her..and LULU?? dang she is a riot I like her spunk and her attitude..hehe..and wow all these good looking demons..hmmmm wouldnt I soo luv to be there amongst them all..hehe..again another great chap hope to read another update soon..:-) till then and always be well safe and good with much hugs and smiles Mija..:-)
person Mija
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwww I soo luv Ash too..why cant she have him??? sniffles..and ya know Sesshy will hurt her if he finds out..grrrrrrrrr..lol..but is wondering..why does it bother Sesshy soo much that the might think of Ash while shes masterbating?? and not give a fig when she replied that she was thinking of Rob Thomas?? does Sesshy have a jealousy thing with Ash?? lol..me wonders..and I soo luved this chap and am very very glad you updated..and soo cant wait till you update again..and update the Yu Yu one too..hint hint..hehe..again great chap I sooooo cant wait for more..:-) till then huggs and smiles Mija..:-)