rate_review Reviews

good first chptr, I'm afraid that's all the time I have today to keep reading your story. But when I get a chance to, I will, it's good, better then my story *bows down* I'm not Worthy!
Thanks also for reviewing my story(cause no one else will) and not many people would read it when it was on fictionpress.
also letting you know that my story Stray, has updated 3 more chpters.
I'll be coming back to finish reading what you have written soon.
thanks.

I can't believe this fic only has 2 reviews! I really enjoy the originality of this story line. Naraku is an interesting character that not many people choose to write about, unless it is some harsh fight scene. It is great how you have made him a major character and I also like how you have worked his personality into this fic. He's not what I would consider OC, because he is still controlling and cruel to a certain point.

I hope you post ch 5 soon.

I, in general, am not fond of this type of fic, however, I make an exception for yours. Nicely written, I enjoy reading this and eagerly await your next chapter.

I am disappointed, I thought you posted a new chapter. And is it me or does it seem a chapter short? I know, complaining like a housewife. That's ok, I'll just be a little patient and what for more chapters. Just hurry up with them...I'm really iesteested in the story.