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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. You have a way with imagery. :D
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Keep up the good work, let me see more!!!
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story and i can't wait till the next chapter! You are doing a great job and you're getting better with every chapter that is posted! please don't make me wait for too long for the next chapter to be posted, and please don't tell me that this is the end!!!!!!! I better not hear those words from you until it actually all ties together and i know everthing about every cliffy! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!! never stop!
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love this fanfic! update soon!
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January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. An interesting twist with having the baby causing a problem in time. I like how you've developed a situation that authors often try to write (rarely successfully) so well. Can't wait for the next chapter! You rule!!!
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you cant seperate them just when they have a baby
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THis story is so good. What is going on with Inuyasha Why did he go outside? Is someone wating for him?
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kagome shuld live with InuYasha, hands down. They could keep the well open and visit her family on the weekends, that way she doesnt' abandon them and she can raise her child with InuYasha, the love of her life. It would be a sad fic if you separate them. SO DON'T SEPARATE THEM!! <3
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story. very cute. keep going i want to know what happens. ^^
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Quite nicely done. I think Miroku might have been a wee bit too chatty, seeing as he was finally getting what he'd been sniffing after for so long. Guy rule #7. When you finally "get it", shut the hell up before you say something to change her mind.
Anyways, really good stuff, and nice insight into Sango's feelings of unattractiveness.
Ciao.
W.
Anyways, really good stuff, and nice insight into Sango's feelings of unattractiveness.
Ciao.
W.