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for Always and Forever

by KeikoDogDemon

schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*choked up*
person YuukiSan
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As if you did that! I actaully cried when Kagome left. If I had my say Kagome, being the stubbron little thing she is, would find her way back to Inuyasha. I just don't know how she would do that.

The baby (I forget how to spell her name oops!) sounds so cute. The description does make sense, making her look only somewhat demon since the demon portion isn't really that strong.

I still love this story, just thought I'd let you know. Oh by the way thanks for reading my Fruba fic. You have no idea how much that means to me. Your opinions mean the a lot to me as well.

~YuukiSan & NinjaMouse
person aquadreamer310@yahoo.com
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg so depressing write more i would like to know kagome is going to be able to come back
person PJ
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. what I don't understand is why that priestess can't die completely. What is the big deal why is it so important that she stay 'alive'? I mean Kagome should have made a choice I can understand why INuyasha couldn't stay in her time but she could have choosen to stay with him. At least he has his daughter and friends. Kagome still has her family but she lost her mate & daughter will Inuyasha & his daughter live the 500yrs or will they find a way to open the well? this is good keep writing.
person drake220
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are killing me!! i have to know what they're going to do!!!
person foxfire730
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! POOR INUYASHA POOR KAGOME!!!! YOU HAVE TO MAKE HER COME BACK!!!!!!
person YuukiSan
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok you have to let Kagome and Inuyasha together at the end. It's just too sad if you don't. Inuyasha has already lost every person he ever loved in his life now his has to loose his child! That's just too cruel.

I love this story though, I think that it's absolutly amazing. My favourite part is when Inuysha tells Kagome that she's pregant. It's just too cute and funny.

Please you have to write more and update. The cliffhanger you left us on his killer!

~YuukiSan & NinjaMouse
person angrybulldog
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that's all fine and dandy, but like any author, she probably just wants more feedback to see if she should continue the story the way it's going, so don't leave a flamer just for that.
person Myownhappyending (nlo)
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW WOW WOW!! What a great story this is! I'm so excited to find out what will happen to Inuyasha and Kagome!!!
person Just me
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think thats really childish... "I'll update again when I get 3 more reviews"...