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for Lemonade on a Moonless Night

by Shakirah

person Iyasu
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice work! Two lemons at once! Yeah baby!
person Neon Greywords
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Five stars you you! That was really sweet... I loved it. :3
person Hakuryuu
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This is one of the most well-written, in character Inu-Yasha stories I've read in a VERY long time! You've done an absolutely mind-blowing job with the details, descriptions, and general... everything! The only only only thing I would advise is to make the scene changes a little clearer, maybe with just a small ~ or something to mark the break. It got a bit confuzing, but other than that it was just an awesome story! I can't wait to read more of your works!!! If you would ever like me to beta, or just to talk, you have my email. ^^ Congrats on a job well done!
person ImMoRtAlToAsT
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This is so incredibly beautiful! Wonderfuly written and very cool ideas! I love the fact that Inuyasha is a virgin, or WAS =) you must continue
person Lime and Lemons
schedule August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love Lemons!!! Update it soon!!
person MarionTarielle
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very, Very well written! I enjoyed this fic more than I can tell you. Keep up the great work.. I'll be checkingk tok to see if you have written any more fics! Great Job!
person bebejinx
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i really liked your story and i hope there's more to come. there is more right??
person Mija
schedule August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh that was just a truelly beautifull Chapter...and Inu a virgin??? priceless..ive read that concept before but you wrote it out very well and really seemed to capture his innocence on sex..it was perfect I luved this chapter..not sure if its still on going or youve stopped...the way the chapter ended it seemed like it could be either...I like it alot, if you stopped it there then it was a beautifull fic, if contcontinue then I cant WAIT to read the next chapter..:-)
person ApriL
schedule August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good story!
person stayingput29
schedule August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Just wanted to say that I enjoyed it and for a first fic I think you did Good....so keep up the good work..... Thats all....