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Congratulations on your baby! Life is a lot of work. Nice twist in the current chapter-who is the mysterious creature that Taro encounters?? Ihave my guesses, but I'll wait and see.Are you really Inca descent?; I'm half Mexican-just curious...Anyway,will Taro have a love interest too-to make the plot thicken?? I like to see when you got time to write-it's a big change being a new mom. Congratulations!

keep up the good work, nice story, i really cant wate to see where this goes



Naheta

I know a lot of people don't believe in reincarnation simply because they don'tt itt it can happen;Christ is an avatar,but some are agnostic/or atheist(I respect that)(I take it you don't-it doesn't matter;we are different people with our own experiences-that's is what makes us special). I think you have a lot of talent and are very good at angst writing-a lot of first loves are like that-no happy ending but that's life-it is SOOO much harder as an adult when it's a husband/significant person(I hate the term "other"-we are talking about people)/wife,etc with/or without kids.I simply put that comment in with your story(the one on media miner) because of the experiences I've had as a woman and a Wiccan;no I don't do drugs nor liquor-never have, never will(only responsible sex-when I feel like it).So I'm not crazy;I'm glad you are continuing it; it's not too lemony;but angsty-good. Personally I'm not that good a writer;I'm more of an artist/poet (not professionally but for self satisfaction-that might change;we'll see) but that's something else-too many people have stolen previous stuff for me to trust putting it up;I just don't know.I'm surprised you are able to answer and do the writings with your marriage and kid)s?)-Soo busy-it's hard;this is the same one,right?If you're going to make it kind like real life;please have Kagome have some adult fun even though Inuyasha is out of the picture-that would be more appropr(and(and fun);just like real life(you know have other sex/romance affairs with other men or women-why not?-;even though she's a mom).Keep it up;it's encouraging to see young women with other interests besides the mundane as well as the freedom to practice those interests;not enough are out there ,unfortunately.Well, that was long; I'm done;Happy Holidays to all(I don't know others' denominations-to all you Wiccans out there-Happy Yulemass!From the Dark High Priestess of the LilithQueen Tradition(who happens to be an anime over and Inuyasha fan too among other things)Maybe I'll post some of my writings if I can be convi-ver-very extreme lemons if ever do, though-maybe..Anyway- Happy Holidays!!Blessed Be......

(sniffles-sobs) Inu left her??? how could he??? waaaaaaaa...and poor Kikyo, ok ya made me like the little witch on this one, but still, if she realizes something she hadnt before, then maybe she will free Inu from his promise?? but I know that wont happen, you already stated that this was not a they lived happily ever after fic..which makes me wonder...if Kagome had Inu's child or someone elses then that means Inu is gone..either dead by Naraku or dead with Kikyo..omg I cant take this I have to find out what is going to happen...please please update soon k?? I luv this story although its sad and makes me cry I luv it and have to know whats going to happen..soo please update k?? great story..huggs Mija

Hey! This is my first time reviewing, but I just wanted to commend you on a job well done!!! I nearly cried when Kouga and crew died... I'm not even a Kouga Fan (I mean, I don't mind him but I'm not in love with him) but jeez... that would be way too sad. Anyway I think you're doing a great job, and please email me if you need any help! I'd love to Beta as well, if you need one! ;) Great job!

ok I literlly cried here..sniffles really..I did...that was sooo sad...waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh.....ok i dont sound like that but ya get the point it was sad but soooooo good soo dont ya dare stop...I luv this story its not updated as much as I would luv to see it, but if it was well then what would I have to look foward too?? hehe anyways great chap as always..and yes sniffles it was sad but I soo so luved the tears.....:-) huggs mija

Oh!
I really like this...
*tear* Its so sad though...
I'm not very good with the suggestions but...Hope you get over your writer's b;ocks soon!
*h aut authors 'Get well soon' cards.*
Can't wait for the next chapter!

Nice work ^^ I've already reviewed the first two chapters...somewhere, but not here. I love the depressive nature of this fic.

ooh noo..I mean it is sad, but you wrote that this was not a happily ever after ending on your summery, so I expected it to be sad, this is excellent work..I truelly love this story, the way you express the emotions and feelings of thier loss is soo detailed and well written..I luv this story and I soo can not wait to read more..soo update soon k?? sorry I have no suggestions for you, but I will cross fingers and hope your writers block will go away..lol..been there and not fun...again luv this fic cant wait for more..:-)

omg that was sooooooooo sad..(sniff)..(sobs) omg I luv this story, its sad but written soo well and with much thought...luv it please update soon..please?? must read more..(prepares to cry again when update comes out)