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for Check and Checkmate

by Darkswansong

person `Dragon blue
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
thank you, thank you thank you!! i really love this story so far, and am sure tcan only get better. you are a really good writer . up date soon plz!!
person dragon blue
schedule August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i read this story awhile ago on ff.net, and have been waiting and waiting for updates!!! thank you thank you thank you!!i really liked this story, good wroting ^_~
person Soudesuka_Shurikens
schedule August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
there's only one thing i can really say....
"...THAT WAS GREAT..."
KEEP UPDATING AND KEEP ON TRUCKING.
person Kaye
schedule August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait until the next chapter. I can see why it was too racy for ff.net. This is really good. Keep it up!
person Doggnuts
schedule August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to know why you decided to post this story here all of a sudden? I also wanted to know what the hell took you so long to update. Do you know how long I have been waiting? Eternity, that's right f-o-r-e-v-e-r. I don't mean to chew you out, but your fic is great and I was so mad when I had to wait so long to read more. So please don't take so long to update again...oh yeah before I forget nice chap.
person Mija
schedule August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh me like this story..hehe and sooo luv the ummm shower scene with Inu..yummy..something about a guy having no power to control his arousal and looking for a way to release...ok im calm, heart rate back..ooh please please update real soon k?? luv it!