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for My Unwilling Mate

by LoriLanders

person ShiroInu
schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The mother part was played out very well, I'm impressed. I loved the lemony scenes, great as always! You need to update more though, hehe, your a very talented writer and I really want to see more chapters! Much more!
person Jinhito (Too lazy to log in...)
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O!!! You left off there! No~o! *goes into a ranting rage* It was all just getting good... then bam! It's gotta be the end of chapter 18!!! T-T Please finish this soon... I can't wait to read more; in fact I'm dying from my curiousity of what's gonna happen next! =D Please update again soon!
person Inu
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH please update sooner this time!!!
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY you updated. I like this story and I was afraid you weren't going to finish it, but I'm always happy/greedy for another chapter so roll em in. MORE I SAY..MORE!!!

Thank you
person Nina
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I have waited for so long for you to update. All I can say is WOW it was certainly worth the wait. The love scene between Kagome and Koga was beautiful, hot and romantic. And the confrontation between Mrs. H. and Koga and Kogame was well thought out. I'm so glad that you dit hat have Mrs. H. accept Kagome and Koga's mating. Everything Mrs. H. said was true about Kag's future in their time. I'm so tired of Mrs. H. being portrayed as a ditzy mom who only knows how to say 'gee that's wonderful Kagome, whatever you want Kagome, you know best'. Please, the girl's a teenager. Mrs. H. was correct to say what she did, even though we all know that Kag belongs with Koga. Mrs. H. doesn't know Koga or his people or anything about the fedual era. I'm glad you had her voice her concern the way any responsible mother would. I'm so interested to see how you work all of this out. I just hope that you update sooner than the last chapter, but I suppose to write something great takes time. Good luck with the next chapter. I'm looking so forward to it.
person Maiandra
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You've made me love Kagome! I love Kouga already and this is one of the best stories around. I've been looking for a Kagome/Kouga story and I'm so glad I found yours!!!
person me
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great i like how mrs higurashi wasnt all perfect happy cheery
person Tom
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
About time.
Semper Fidelis
person Quita
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Your Back.. And I loved it. Though I didn't know weather to be proud or cry for kouga.
So I ended up doing both. Silly huh!! I was having a bad day. This story brighten it a little.
Thank you for an wonderful chapter. Hope you update soon.
Mad~Hatter^_^
person Kudari
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story. ^.^ v This was the first time that I have ever read this coupling and I didn't think I was going to like it. But I loved it.

I was wondering if you are going to write anymore for it or if chapter 17 was the end?