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for My Unwilling Mate

by LoriLanders

schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
geez Kouga!
LOL. I'm just laughing my head off
over what he plans to do. I'm sure he'll be successful
but also, geez, the description of him knocking her up
again and again and again.....etc got me in a crazed laughter as
well. Sounds just like my husband if he had his way. Thank
goodness such spells don't exist today!!!
thanks for the entertainment!
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why is Inu always such an A-hole?
Sheesh Kags should have said 'sit' like a billion times when he called
her a B and useless! Well, on to the next chap
person AnimeFanInuYasha
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok I really hate chapter 5, but that is to be expected from an InuKag Fan. I really like this story though. YOU'VE GOT TO START MAKING NEW CHAPTERS!!! I keep checking to see if you have, but you haven't!!! RAA!!!!!! Ok I'm better now. I have a favor, I'm sorry if you're a KogKag fan, and I'm asking you this, but can you write an InuKag story YOU'RE REALLY TALENTED!!!!!
person Happy Reader
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have left alot of reviews on 100s of FANFIC in all anime series. I found your fanfic to be one of the best that i have read i a long time the whole Kouga/ Kagome set up was perticularly brilliant. I consider your story to be in the top 5 of about 125 fanics that i have read. i hope to read more of your fanfics in the future. Keep Writing.
person BlinkroxKK
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi ya! I REALLY LOVED YOUR STORY!!!!!! IT WAS the BEST fanfic I've ever read on Kouga and Kagome! I Really want you to update as soon as possible. Ooooh, I hope Kagome and kouga have pups/kids......that would be so cool. I LOVE KOUGAXKAGOME fics!They are the best. And the authors are awsome too! Actually, I'm writing a fic about KagxKog right now! But your is WAY better then mine. I hope you can update REALLLLLLYYYYY SOOOOONNNN!!! PLEASE!!!!!!! Do it for Kagome and Kouga!
person Naito_Mitsukai
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!! GREAT STOREY!! i really love the detail!! and how you capture everyone's personalities, rather then just usuing the characters and having them completly different!! =D BUT WHERE'S THE UPDATES?? ~cries~ lol i really really really wanna see what happens next ~whimper~ PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! ~starts praying, lights incence prays to you for updates~
person Alko
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGosh, I loved this story!! It was amazing! I never read a story quite like this. Your vocabulary is outstanding and your wording is fantastic! I finished reading all of it up to chapter 19. Are you going to do more? Is it finished? PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE continue. I'm dying to know what happens next after Koga and Mrs. H. talk about Kagome while she's off in the feudal era. ^^
If ya' can let me know by e-mailing me when you did another chapter, that would be the BOMB!
Otherwise, I'll still keep checking back every now and then. ::added it to his favorites:: ^_____^
Anyways, splendid work! It has got to be by far the best fanfic I've ever read in my life!
10/10! Perfect score! You deserve it. This story is amazing.
Good luck with all your dreams in the future.

-Alko
person sexykitten
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was such a great story plz let me know when you have done more to it ok thanks.
person badkitty
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really, really liked this story. I liked the way everything came nicely together and the path that it was on. I hope that this story hasn't been dropped, but from the looks it has. Oh well, at least I got to enjoy what I did of the story.
person aaaaa
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this story sucked.. along with all the kouga kagome plots theres just nothing right about them they suck no matter how skilled the writter... an ur no execption i think this story blows i cant read anymore im disgusted