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for Before I die

by Genevieve

person Mija
schedule August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg this one was soooooooo good..who would of thought Naraku controling Kouga??? I liked this chap alot..please please please update as soon ou cou can please?? ty ty
person ApriL
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not again! WeLL, can't wait for the next chapter (pLease hurry!) Oh, and I KNEW it was Kouga...even though you didn't yet, and bLah bLah bLah
person Kinu
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HI i heard your c for for help in the forest for reviews and i was so hurt not to see more of them i love you story so far and i will review all the others as well I PROMISE =). and if you like come to my website www.destined.to/inuyasha or please e-mail me!
person kinu
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi its me again i love it even better than the first and i love how long they all are keep up the good work.
person SanosLilRebelGurl
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*stands and wriggles out of the jacket, then runs around the room screaming' im free!im free! then falls over Goigjh on the floor' sorry about that. lol. I swear to the gods that if yuoi dont update soon, *bleeps ensue for the next ten minutes* ok im fine now, but i cant speak for the rest of the people in them. Lm. LMAO! just playing, i really hope that the 'eyes' wil be Sesshomarou, hes just too cute! well, its was good as uaual. later, dinner is done. and if you want a beta reader, email me. Later



Blondes Rule!
person nightmareofcat
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
its me again hahahaha lol well any way i like the chapter and the whole story for that matter by the way u think u have a lot of cats i know i have a lot of them 9 adults and 16 kittens im not kidding either well anyway i gotta go later
person Mija
schedule August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
arggggggghhhhhhh a cliffy!....(sniffles,,then whines) but I want to read more....ok ok putting myself back together...sigh...anyway love this chap, its wonderfull...and from the look and sound of it, it has to be Shesshomaru or someone else...because isnt Jenenji that sweet half demon with the herb garden?? he would never want to break Kagome or either live or die by his will, Jenenji was such a sweetie..I cant see him hurting her or anyone else...anyhow thats my thought, unless its Kouga, hes fast too soo could be him, ooh you got my mind a thinking and wanting more sooo pleaseeeeeee pleaseeeeeee update..:-)
person Kitty
schedule August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I vote for Jinenji the other hanou that fell in love with Kagome. He wouldn't have to want her for lemony reasons, that's kind of scary, but saving her from Inu yasha sounds right up his alley.
person Nekiochan
schedule August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.

As for the stalker, you said that you were thinking of Sess, to be that stalker. But in the story, you said that the stalker was getting feelings, so it can't be Sess, or can it?

I know it's a guy, so thats a start. (that would be *really* creepy if it was a girl) Also you said *finally Kagome was HIS* or something on the lines of that. It can't be Naraku, that would be too obvious. It could be Kouga, but would he kidnap Kagome AGAIN?

Aghh it's too confusing. My poor little brain can't handle the thinking process. (migrain's comin along)

Just pick whatever person/thing you want to be the stalker. It can't be that hard.......or can it.

Well hope your not banished from the computer for too long.....But hey, the good thing is while your away, you can write more chapters. YEAH !!!!

Part my my house. Yeah, I wish, BUT it could happen with the right people.

Anyway can't wait till the next chapter(s) come out.

Good luck !!!!
person ApriL
schedule August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
When i said it was messed, I meant that there wasn't anotheapteapter and I was Looking forward to it. Anywho, my first guess is that the abducter/staLker is Kouga. Anyway, I'm anxious for another chapter, so...uh...yeah.