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August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Grabs knife and waLks toward you* HeLLo there, Goijh...naw, jp. Is that the end of the story!? I hope not. Anywho, I'm not a big fan of Lemons, but I enjoyed this story thus far. Do you have any other stories?
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August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
FUCK, FUCK WHAT THE FUCK,WHERRE THE FUCK YOU ...AHHHH FUCK HOW COULD YOU, FUCK WHAT THE DAMN FUCK AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YOU EVIL, YOU CLIFFY, BRAIN , MY BRAIN FUCK *SCREAMS, AND STARTS PLANING 'SOMEONES' DEATH*
YOU WILL FINISH THIS AND SOON VERY VERY SOON AND THERE WILL NOT BE A CLIFFY IN IT, * STARTS RANTING WORDS INU WOULD BLUSH AT* AHLL FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU WILL FINISH THIS AND SOON VERY VERY SOON AND THERE WILL NOT BE A CLIFFY IN IT, * STARTS RANTING WORDS INU WOULD BLUSH AT* AHLL FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh thats just wrong!!!!!!!..you said this chap was not a Cliffy!!!!....you lied!!!!!!!!!!!!.......(whines and sobs)..no fair no fair...cant get a gals emotions all worked up to leave her hanging like that..sniffles..meanie....(lookes wide eyed and then guilty) Im sorry your not a meanie...but finish the love scene pleaseeeeeeeee?? pretty please????
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August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... *gasp* lolZ
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August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU ARE EVIL!!!!!!! (lol) I think you should go in to the dominatrix business because you like to torture us so much!!!! I'm in pain!! No lemon cliffies!!!!!
YOU ARE EVIL!!!!!!! (lol) I think you should go in to the dominatrix business because you like to torture us so much!!!! I'm in pain!! No lemon cliffies!!!!!
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August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GAH! VILE! *falls silent for a moment* like I really should be talking there . . . sort of the pot calling the kettle black. More please, and soon : )
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August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I wont hurt you, yet.... As long as you keep ME happy, i wont threaten you. *thinks if she kills Goigh the story wont get updated, then sits back down* I cant belive that you left the damn story on a cliffy! Do you know how much I hate cliffies!!!! I will forgive you if you uodate within two days. Well, I have other people to threaten. Later
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August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
pouts......sniffles.......kicks at pebbles with her feet likehildhild...whines......NO FAIR!!!!......I want more.....ok composes self...please please write more?? ya cant just leave it there...sniffles please update soon?? ty..:-)
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August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. I love the parts where he starts getting turned on! I'm such a hentai, I know:) I absolutely loved the tickling scene!!! Patiently waiting for a lemon!!!!!
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August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far. Very engaging . . . so what's up with Kouga? From the sounds of it, you originally planned on Naraku grabbing Kagome. If that's the case, you should read my story on FF.Net, Starlight and Shadows. You might find it enjoyable, you might not. Either way, keep up the good work.