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for Before I die

by Genevieve

person Inu Nagi
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*wimpers* i should have commented waaaaay long ago *sniffles* but im doing it now *smiles....the story is going just wonderful so far!..you keep inu yasha and kagomes persona the same even though cough 'things' have happened between them. i have red many storys where after it happens the writer completely changes one or both characters in how they act, but you seem to keep inu, inu lol....as for the shippou and inu thing....no matter what they will always be that way towards eachother, bonded or not lol...

second to lastly...my fave part had to be the hot springs...poor hanyou got caught..serves him right eh!

and lastly...perhaps a chapter about inu defending whats.aft.after all now they are mates and somethings bound to happen...right?..maybe a new demon or kikyo could just 'come along' and tries to kill her or something lol

but keep up the good work and i did happen to like the cliff hanger!!! its always good to grab the readers like that.

all for now :)
~ Nagi
person ApriL
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY you updated! *sigh* ok, can't wait for the next chapter!
person inugirl21
schedule September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love your story. please please please continue!! **get down on her knees** i beg you. you are awesome! ^_^
person ApriL
schedule September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Man, I'm so in Love with this story...pLease update!
person Mija
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg I sooooo luved this chapter..hehe..Kagome being the little vixen..and ooh my..what will Kouga say when he smells thier lovemaking on them when they reach the village??? omg what will Inu DO to Kouga when he sees him?? ooh I have to know please please update soon k?? ty ty ty and btw sorry bout your surgery but I will keep ya in my prayers and hope all goes smoothly for ya, which Im sure it will..:-) be well safe and happy..and ummm update soon?? hehe...huggs and smiles Mija..:-)
person SanosLilRebelGurl
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i have to say, even though the chapter was very good, the end was the funniest damn thing i heard tonight! sounds like something i once said to a teacher....*tries to look innocent and fails badly* it happend only once! it sux getting suspended for a day. well, i am waiting for the chapters, with my knives and rabid dogs... LMFAO. Later
person Nhyemia
schedule September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I was gonna read all the chapters you had then review, but I gotta tell you something. Right when the 'shadowy figure' kidnaped Kagome, I was lisening to the inuyasha ost that I downloaded from animeforever.com The song was #7: Yokai Sesshaumaru. It had that dangerous evil sound that they play when bad stuff is happening. It was a perfect background sound ^_^ realy made the mood.

Oooh! I forgot -_~ I realllllyyy love your story so far I'm at chapter 4 Still dont know who the stalker is and I'm not gonna peek....
person Mija
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh I have to have more...please??? this was just too funny...poor Kouga..he was under Naraku's spell after all soo hope Kagome forgives him and Inu doesnt beat the crap outta him..well not much anyway hehe anyhow luv this chap and sooo cant wait to read the next and NOOOOOOO no cliffys please??? hehe ty ty ty huggs Mija..:-)
person Jess
schedule August 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So what will happen next! This fanfic is really good!
person kyra
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
sesshomaru! naraku! either one! they're both heartless hotties!