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for Before I die

by Genevieve

person SpikeDoomDoom
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HEHE the first two chapters where actualy realy funny the whole dive bomb thing i think kagome should be happy that sounded kinda like a thrill ride at a amusement park lol and i like how the story follow thru and all around good plot. But i got a question you talk alot about Miroku and Sango but is there gonna be a pairing between them in the future hehe it would be funny if they try and keep it secret while kagome and inuyasha do the same thing lol. compliments to the author ;)
person Kajin
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE! NOW!!!!!!!!!! or death shell come nocking at your door muhahahahahahahahah! i really like it it's fluffy yet lemony, mmmmmmmmmons,ons, so keep wrighting it *hands you a cookie* don't worry it's not possied......................yet, muhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person kccranfield
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for a highly amusing story. I have laughed and sighed I hope in all the right places. So anyhow just wanted to let you know your talent is appreciated.
person weijaa
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If you do not update.......soon.....I will sic my army of killer ferrets on you!!!!
person ApriL
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's done!? Aw...
person Sasami
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Kinesiness! the last chapter was great, everything was great... The lemon was great! *blush~*
person Lizzy
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You said review.. So I'm reveiwing. o.O anyways, love this li'l fanfic sooo much. read it all in one night... god, that's gonna come back and slap me in the face at school tomorrow. I'm gonna be, like, half dead. Oh well. Was worth it. Lurve this fanfic. ^^;;
person Maetel
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story. I just feel bad for poor Kouga... :-( Please update soon.

PS - Are you going to have Inuyasha go to Kagome's time or what??
person csb
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading to chapter 15. Great story and remarkably few grammatical errors (why is it we hentai fans are usually cursed with over-active imaginations but lesst stt sterling grammar?). Anyway, please keep writing stories, you've a real nack for it.
person Mija
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh I thought that was wonderfull..awwwwwwwwww poor Kouga his poor heart and his thoughts, he said sorry to Kagome but he still doesnt know if she forgives him and he still thinks hes a monster, it wasnt his fault...sniffles..will Kagome forgive him?? I hope she does..please update soon, soo love this story..with much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)