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for Spring fertility festival

by jeffshelton

person Elf From Space
schedule August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the very few fics I can find in the InuYasha section anymore that is not either Sess/Kag or so lame an idea it gags me. Thank you for the creative story, paying attention to the characters and writing things well enough to get your point across and please continue!
person Naomie
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like that so far! Please PLEASE PLEASE!!!! update soon!! I am not a member so could you please e-mail me when you do update i will return the favor witha review arigato wonderful story!
person ills
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
kool
person hakuryuu
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! I just love it!!! One of the things I think you should work on is In-characterness... the only person I noticed was a bit OOC was Miroku, when he was yelling at Inu-Yasha... but it's really good, and I like it! Please keep it up!
person luna_night
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hello!!

i would like to say that i felt your story was extremely well done. it had a lot of thought and planning i am going to look up the dances i find japanese myth very interesting. i didnt feel miroku was ooc because u keep me inside a fea few days i got stir crazy too and get really nasty..its like im a different person.. ..im nosey..well i wish you best of luck with your story and i really really look forward to more of it..i just know inu will do that little dance with kagome.heheheheh wahhhhahahhaha anyway have a good day!!!

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person lady-willowish
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like thiss tory o far! i hope u rite more very soon, this is a very original idea keep it going. :)
person Mija
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg I luv this I have to have more please please update really really soon K?