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for Spring fertility festival

by jeffshelton

person inuficcrzy
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
whoa.

that was intense. can't wait for more!!!
person hakuryuu
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What an awesome story!!! I think that you were able to keep the OOC-ness to a minimum, and I really love all this true-to-life stuff! How interesting!!! Keep it up... I'll be waiting for the next chappy!
person dragonflyelj
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! chapter 3 was great, can't wait for chapter 4! And I really love that you take the time to find out real tid-bits of history, it gives sto story an added depth.
person aleaha
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lol...that last part was funny as fuck...I can't wait for the next chappy please hurry hurry
person Jilly B
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you eevilevil sataonic person. how dare you leave that there and not review right away!!!!! its alot like cruel unusual punishmet for the dedicated fanfiction reader. anyway, pleae update!!!!!!
person Mija
schedule August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oooh..(whines an sniffle) how could ya leave it on a cliffy??? no fair....sniffles then composes self..ok ok im done, luv this story and i sooooooo cant wait for the next chap..please update soon k??? pretty please? ty ty
person aleaha
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can't remember the first time I read the first chapter of this story (so I'm asumin its been a while) I hope you update soon I'm very curious about what will happen next
person sessylover
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is so intersting please continue ur story is very unique!!! me likes!!!!! please update soon!!!!!
person Lady MoonShadow
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
CRUEL!!! How could leavleave us a cliffy there?!? I'm dyin' here!


MSF
person kenji
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good ficm even though i dont quite understand some of it. as long as kagome ith ith inuyasha im happy!