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for Spring fertility festival

by jeffshelton

person kenji
schedule September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i wonder if inuyasha is still mad about kagome's dance.
person Babsie
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic work.
But you will made them talk their fellings right?? right???
No mater what...they are marriade...even without the cerimony.
I beleive that when two people are in love and stgagethgether they are married.
So ...all i have to know is that the gods looks o them happy and wish their happy too.
I really like your work
Update soon
person Mija
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg lol only Inu would fight a God..hehe gotta luv that part...ooh this chapter was goood I luved it and sooo cant wait for 6..hope its up soon..:-) luv this story..huggs Mija..:-)
person fujifunmum
schedule August 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jeffs,
This story is really inventive and original. The research is worthwhile and makes the setting and activities quite believable. Excellent fic!
person Mija
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great chapter..!...can not wait to see the part of Inu and Kag..and its very cool that the Gods tree actually came to be in form and how HE is the one who wanted Kagome and Inu in the dance...oooh I sooo cant wait to read more soo please update soon..K?..ty ty ty
person dragonflyelj
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter from Jeff's creative genius! Can't wait to read more, I really love this fic.
person Babsie
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good story.
I´m barely can wait for seen the consequences of this festival :-)

Update soon
person aleaha
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is more like a echi *did I spell that right* japaness history lesson I love it
person Lady Sethia
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NO!! Cliffies totaly suck. lol. I love the story, very original. I am very curious to see what happens next. Please update soon!
person Mija
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ok ok I soooooooooo luved this chapter but being the silly perv I wanted to read more..(whines) ok ok im calm, but I do want to read more, I want to read Sango and Mirokus dance and if Kagome will ummm ya know with Inu??? hehe...this is a great story..soo glad you updated I can not wait for the next chap, and I luv that you put alot of history into it, and explain it soo that people like me..can understand it..:-) ty ty soo much again luv the chap cant wwait for more..:-)