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by jeffshelton

person hakuryuu
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You did very nicely in this chapter... I really enjoyed the scene with Kagome's Mother, as well as the Mirosan scene... Just gorgeous, and a nice way to wrap up those mini-chapters. Can't wait until the next!
person Babsie
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well
another fantastic chapter.
I really like this plot and all jap japanese history inclued in it.
Inuyasha can´t really destroy the goshinboku, right?
Now Kagome could be pregnant, Inuyasha intend do do it again...what about Kikyou? Hope lost :-)
I love the way Miroku react, even if he don´t have a say about it, he will fight for his child...very good and coerent. Afterall Miroku always want a child.
Can´t wait for the next chapter
Keep doing a great work here
update soon
person hakuryuu
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... there are some really hard desicions there, huh? Well great job with the drama. and keep it up!
person PrincessLemon
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Poor Sango and Kagome! I hope everything turns out allright. Please post the next part soon
person Mija
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yayyyyyy you update..again another great chap..I feel sad thaildrildren must die, but I do understand why, sigh but Im glad Kagome is not thinking if aborting her child with Inu..she is prego right?? Or did I get that wrong?? and omg Inu taking revenge on the Gods tree?? thats priceless..does he get to do it or does Kagome stop him??? cant wait to find out..update soon k??? again another great chap..till the next one be well and be happy huggs Mija..:-)
person RavenShadow
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit you aproached the subject of aborition in a proper manner. Useing Keade with reason and consern was a wise touch and true the stats are largely against the village. I hope that readers remember that we are talking about another time period and that the challenges that they faced are not our own. So I must congradulate you on a ter ter well written and I can not wait to see what is going to occur next!
person Babsie
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OHMYGOD!
What to do in a such situation?
And about the mark? This make or not kagome belongs to Inu?
we know they belong together but they still have to see this.
Well looks like Kagome and Inuyasha will have kids too...

I understand Sango´s wish of abortion and all explanations that kaede have done...but...Mirolu , as a houshi and a father has a word on it don´t him?

I like very much this chapter.
Please, update soon.
person kenji
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
have inuyasha not miroku go after kagome and talk with her.
person MysticInca
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story has been an absolute treat to read! Its not often you learn something new from fanfiction?! I throughly enjoy the history lesson in the end of every chapter, you explain everything so well....it makes me wonder if your a teacher. ^^ Anyway that was a risky move for the last chapter, i have no problem with the abortion thing, it was done then to keep more villagers alive. (or at least that was thea iea i got from your ending notes) I really hope you don't get any bad responses for this chapter. I honestly can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter....I'm so addicted to the history you have written in here!! Great work, wonderful chapter!

Mystic
person hakuryuu
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... every time you just manage to blow me away with your thought out, in-depth and historically accurate chapters... It'll never cease to amaze me! Keep up the wonderful writing!