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Okey
This was a very plausible end.
I think that they really act as their personalities.
I enjoy very much read this story, but i´m one of the readers that bug you with the ending hun?
well...to my optimistic way to see it... there are a happy end because nobody doubts that they will kill Naraku...so...in the far end...they stay together ..hehehehe :-)
You are a very good writer.
I already read your other stories...and I LOVE the day after proposal :-)
Keep writing. I can´t wait to see what will happen in Kyoto.

Well, your story have an odd effect on me. I think the positive point is the information about sex and birth control. I hope many people get the information and go look for more. My sister is young and a single mother, her baby comes when she was 15, so I know how difficult is that situation.

And because the experience with my sister I must desagree about Kaede making the decision. You see, my sister is a smart girl and she also knew about sex and birth control, yet she became pregnant. But she wanted her baby and despite the hard life she put herself into, she is a fantastic mother and my nephew, a wonderful five years old boy, is the most important person in hefe afe and our family. The father didn't want him and my nephew doesn't know him. But he is a very happy little boy and I'm sure he feels our love for him.

So I just want to say that I don't agree about other people making the decision about how you must lead your life, body and the path you must take. If the caracter, Kagome, wanted the baby and her family support her decision, I don't see excuses for Kaede act, despite her good intentions.

Well, although my disccord I really liked the story and maby a sequel could make me happy.

Hugs from Brazil

All I can say is this fic from begining to end tot totally awsome..I wouldnt have changed a think even if I had wanted to, it was soo full of detail, yet true to the charactors..I luved it..and I think your writing is awsome, will try to check out some of your other fics as well they sound pretty damn good to me..lol..soo again ty for one awsome story and keep up your writing its soo darn good..:-) much huggs and smiles Mija..:-)

Awesome! I"d be glad to send you a spell/grammar checked version, but it might take a while... ;) keep it up! I can't wait to read the end!

Honestly... I found the strathrather interesting in the earlier chapters which got me reading, but the attitude portrayed regarding orgies and abortions as a solution simply sickened me. A cultural festival is one thing. Endangering the lives of young women by pressing abortions on them is one of the most disgusting, ANTI femist pracices ever to happen! I know that you are entitled to your opinions on matters and I know that there is some historical basis for abortions, but the whole attitude towards them, and towards pressuring young women into having sex before they're married is VERY disturbing. I somehow find it hard to believe that anyone could do such horrible things to anyone else. In spite of only reading enough of the end to try to see if there was any redeeming value, this story has made me literally sick to te stomach. I am sorry if this comes across as a closed-minded flame, but I honestly feel too sickened to make it any less negative.

And you used 'then' when you're supposed to use 'than' Learn the difference

lmaoo omg I luved this chap...lol..Inu getting a bolt of lightening right on the noggin leaving a bald spot?? damn that was priceless and he still tried to go after the tree..lol...then the whole Susana-O thing..but how could he tell her to abort it??? funny..Miroku wants SAngo to keep her baby, and Inu wants Kagome to get rid of hers..sigh...he thinks its Susana-O's...will we ever find out if it is his or Inu's?? ok ok nough babbling..sigh all I know is that I sooooooooooo luv your story and want to read more and cant wait for you to update which I hope is soon..:-) till then huggs and smiles Mija..:-)

The extent of your research impresses me. Even if I didn't like this story (which I do, very much), I'd keep reading just to learn things. Therefore, I was very surprised with the mistake you made in this chapter. Perhaps it wasn't a mistake, but if it was it'll be an easy fix. Pregnancy tests are of absolutely no use the day after fertilization. It is impossible to get an accurate reading until several days or even a few weeks after the fertilized egg implants itself into the lining of uteran wall. In fact, that's how the "morning after pill" works; it prevents the potentially fertilized egg from getting cozy. The only reason I know this is because I go to a women's college and information like this was literally part of first year orientation. Anyway, I thoroughly enjoy this story and hope you update again soon! ^-^

Just a minor point of interest after watching a subbed copy of the 1st IY movie, Kagome calls her mother momma.
I'm really enjoying reading this, the extras you add at the end of the chapters are really interesting to read.

awwwwwwwww I liked this chap..soo Miroku wants the baby huh??? awwwwwww..but I much preferr Sango use the pills than reed hooks...shivers just thinking what they might look like and if they will hurt..ok..now...lol what the heck is Inu doing to the gods tree??? lol...silly Inu..as Ive said only he would fight with a God..lmaooo I soo have to see what happens next..update soon k?? as always I love this fic and cant wait to read more, I thI think Kagome's mom handled things well...huggs Mija..:-)

Okay, this is a good story so far but your grammar and English along with sentence structure need a lot of work. You also need to have it Bata read the editing is so poor it gave me a headache while I read. If u clean it up it will be a fantastic Inu-Yasha tale! Sorry, but that needed to be addressed! Your research was wonderful and I am sure it took a lot of your time, so don't let all that time u spent be wasted. Other wise bravo on a gr8 story 4 Inu-Yasha fans! Lord knows there r no good Inu-Yasha stories out there so don't stop writing. And if u want a Bata reader I have sum1 who is gr8 at it or ask sum of your fans I am sure they would be delighto doo do so.

Mrs. Sanada