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for Take My Breath Away

by Rukhsana

schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohwoweewoweewowwwwww.
that was one artful piece o' lemon there at the end. gives me ideas, ya know...
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WELL...NOW! Tell me where I can find that 'rent a muse', 'cause mine's been absent for several months, now. (I'm still trying to figure out how to finish my 'Incense & Mirth' on this site.)

Seriously, though, this one has become my favorite story from all that you've written (the ones that I've read, anyways!) so far.

And, seeing as I'm just about the same age as you are, I liked Tom Cruise in that movie, "TOP GUN". My husband, even to this day, can't stand him. He says that he's a hypocrite. Go Figure. I STIIL SAY THAT HE'S JUST JEALOUS!

Anywhoos...I happened to like that song, (Take My Breath Away) too, and truly found that it played out perfectly with where you wanted to take this story.

Very well written, although there were many spelling errors. But I kinda chalked that up to where the fingers couldn't keep up with your thoughts. That happens to me sometimes, too.

On a scale of 1 to 10... I'd have to rate this an 11. That's just how good I personally feel that this story is.

KUDOS, GIRL.

Luv ya & leave ya. JA NE.

person Jen
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I'm glad the bitch muse didn't strike ^__^...I loved this fic, it was very well written and not at all like the many cheesy Kagome/Inu Yasha hentai stories I've rbefobefore. Thanks for writing it! n_n
person Mija
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oooh I luved it!!...it was the perfect ending...:-) ty
person LadySesshou
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg u mst rite more!!11

*laughs* The ending shocked me...really shocked me, but I liked it ^^
person aleaha
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
what youkie channel....???? ;) ok I know that was a joke at the end...I just thought I would joke back but I'm tired so, so is my joke...waiting for chapter three
person Mija
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh I luv this!!!!!!...I sooo cant wait for you to update soo please update soon..pretty please??
person Mija
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ummmm can i do something to make your muse hyper?? i mean...(sniffles) I NEED to read More!!!...ok ok im compossed...slightly ooh i luve this please update soon really really soon please??? (sniffles and hopes your muse will have pity)..:-)
person LadySesshou
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha's words...how sad! I guess he was trying to bring Kagome at least a tiny bit of comfort. Kagome's idea about anti-venom is good...I wonder if your muse will allow it to work? My muse has a penchant for killing characters in my fics...yours is unpredictable - which is something I like ^^ I guess I'll just wait and see!
person lil weirdo...
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow i really like your fic so far! very realistic and descriptive...keep it up and update soon!