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for I Close My Eyes

by EroPrincess

person Lizzie Cheung
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE BOTH KIKYOU AND KAGOME.


I think Sango SUCKS!!!

There are mor fics of her and INuyasha... WTF!??!?!

INUKIK!!
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've read quite a few of your stories and thought they were excellent. There is no exception here, "I Close My Eyes" was another excellent work. I hope to see more!
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO I LOVED THAT! I totally agree that more kikyo and inuysasha are needed! DOWN WITH KAGOME!
person Kikyo2
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice but too short.
person Kiyoko
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I rather enjoyed this. It is quite refreashing to see someone write about Kikyo and Inuyasha WITHOUT getting into all of the Naraku crap. It is a bit sickening to see Kikyo always being the "bad guy" in Inu/Kag fics. I myself prefer Inuyasha and Kagome together, BUT I also like Kikyo.
And to all of you who now hate me because I said I like Inu/Kag or because I said I like Kikyo, I have only this to say:

Kikyo was a great Miko and even in death continues to be a good person. Kagome is a bit immature at times, but she too has a good heart. I have no preference as to which one I like better as a person. I think Inuyasha and Kikyo did love each other at one time. But time has a way of changing people, and, sad as it is, they were thrown into surcumstances which broke their trust in each other to such an extent that it would take a great deal of time and work for them to get back together. They just didn't have that time. And even if they did, Kikyo is dead. She may be walking around, but she is dead. So the relationship is a bit like a long distance one: Sooner or later it will have to end. Either Inuyasha would have to die, or they would have to break up. I just doesn't work out. So you see, I'm not saying that I dislike Kikyo, I just think that their relationship is basically doomed and the only way you can write about it is pre-Naraku.
On the other hand, Kagome and Inuyasha really seem to care for each other. She seems to truly love Inuyasha, and he loves her back. I like this pairing because it has a future. You can think well past "The End" with Inuyasha and Kagome. Also, Kagome is younger and a bit sweeter than Kikyo, so I find her better suited to Inuyasha.

There. And if you still want my head on a plate, you'll have to wait untill I finish speaking with the author, THEN go get in the ever-growing line. Now, back to what I was saying about the story:
You have done a fine job. It was well written, though some of the terminollogy made it sound a bit bland. I am looking forward to seeing more of your work.

Kiyoko -(------
person good person
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*pionts to one above* YOU ARE SUCH A BITCH!!!!!!!! (this is not to the author of the story) I may dislike Kikyou as well, But i won't be as to STUPID as to flaming you like the tramp above. they will burn in hell one of these fateful days. They just better wait because they are just UGLY for the comments. And God don't like ugly.
person Cerulean San
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*___________________________* I luffed it! InuKik *hearts* ^O^! Yeah, I'm sick of InuKag too >>...
person Vanessa
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was so cute. I loved it. Keep writing.
person HotnSpicyFox
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU......

This needed to be written so badly. I'm sick to the back teeth of Kagome, the way she treats Inuyasha, and the people who blindly hate Kikyo. Excellent fic.
person #1 Kagome Hater
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeh, go INUYASHA AND KIKYOU!! KIKYOU ISN"T AN IDIOT LIKE U THINK SHE IS GUYS!! SHES ACTUALLY SO WAY COOLER THAN KAGOME!!!BY FAR!!!!!