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for Heart blood and soul

by Misao

person Mija
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooohhhhh thats soooooo cruel..how could ya leave it hanging like that?? sles.les......please please update soooooooon k?? pretty please???
person Goijh
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
I really like your Fanfiction and I can't wait to read more!
^_^
person Mija
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwww man...im really starting to hate cliffys with a vengence...(sighs) please please please update soon??? (hope some begging will do) really like the story and want to read more..know more..hae to know whats going on....pretty please????
person Jilly B
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
your lucky you promised kagome's return...the spam gods are getting angered! any anyway, this is still a great story,now all u gotta do is get inuyasha and kagome back together and it will be the best!!! keep it up!
person kaitlin
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DUDE! how could you do that???cliff hangers suck... how did she get through?? awwwww now im all confuzzled...
person Mija
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg im crying here..(sniffles) i luved that please update soon please????
person dc2048
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I thought this story was really great. can't wait for the next chapter.
person RSB
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Story is an intersting AU. But you need a beta. Some words confused me, "surgant" (did you mean surrogate?): "blotting off" (did you mean bolting?): "Scapper" (did you mean scamper?). No reason why a good story should be so sloppily written. If you don't plan on fixing this story, maybe you can get a beta for your next chapter.
person Jilly B
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you! yeah you! please tell me theres a second chapter where inuyasha and kagome get back together! if you keeem aem apart, i shall have to summon the wrath of the spam potted meat gods upon you. i can do that you know. so! u need a second chapter! ok!? ok! lol great story...keep it going!
person jess
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
when you write more can you give my a buzz I would like to see how it turns out. My e-mail is raven78666@yahoo.com thanks