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OMG, that story was awsome!!!!!!! I take back what I said before about it being to sad. I absolutely love it! So you are going to update soon ....... right. I loved the lemon between Ookami and Kaida. I also absolutely love their characters, all of them. You did a really good job building the relationships and back stories for everyone and I love how you portrad Sessy. I would love to read your back story on how him and Rin got together. Please do one, I'm begging, shamelessly begging. pl-ea-se pretty please, come on you got to now. Anyway just wanted to tell you how wonderful it was and ho well written. There are a few typos here and there but thats about it. Oh and I thought your fight scenes were fine, just because they are different does't meen there is any thing wrong with them. Anyway loved the story and can't wait to read the rest. by the way could you email or message me when you post more. its on my profile. Good luck with school and stuff by the way too.

I was only able to read the first chapter. It was really good but I dont think I m going to be able to finish it. I ended up crying by the end of it. It was really well written and so sad it made my heart hurt. I will try to read more of it later, though after I heal from this. I really do like it though and good luck on your future works.

Okay, I 'm back reading it just took me a few hours for my heart to heal. Not to mention that the other reviews gave me hope and made me curious. Anyway..... I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR STORY, sad stuff and all. You have won me over. "So this is what the dark side is like...not bad." Anywho, I will review again when I'm done or if I just cant contain the joy and have to let you know.

I LOVE your story!!! It's definately one of my favorites!!!

hEY! i LOVE THIS STORY! i WAS TRYING TO REVIEW ALL THE OTHER CHAPPIES BUT BELIEVE OR NOT I COULDN'T TYPE IN ENGLISH. SEE I'M JAPANESE, AND SO IS MY FAMILY, AND MY MUM (oops sorry caps) types in japanese and i couldn't change it back to english. but my brother fixed it for me, yipee!!!!!!!!! Yay fluffy is coming! I kinda wondered what Rin's response would be if they went up against each other. and will he be allies with the others? i so hope so! But i don't think it won't change anything if i begged because you've already writte like sixty thousand more chapters after this one! so anyway, just wanted to let you know that i am enjoying this fic while i die in agony because my period just started about twenty monutes ago. oh i hate this T_T

Midget

hey, me again! still loving your fic, and just ta let ya know, i think your rambling is funny and makes the fic funny so please do keep gong (as you probably already have, i'm kinda behind hey?) And also, aishiteru mo doesn't mean i love you too, it means i love too. it would be ore, as in 'me' in a guy's sense, ore mo, aishiteru yo.' yeah? yeah. okay, onto the next chapter! bai bai!

Midget

HOly shit!!!! Lol i'd only just noticed now that i'd written my name where i should have put my email and my email where my name should have been. oops, lol. Anyway, i LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEEEEEE The fluffy-ness between the brothers, and daddy of course! it's so cute! And rin's gonna be alright, right? i hope so!!!! Oh yeah, and i was gonna say, that stupid flamer, what a dick! i mean, it was soooo stupid, he was (or she, most likely) was laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaame!!!!!!!!!!!! And your response was hilarous! I mean, nice come backs! (love monkey raping your nostrils, lool, funny as!)

Oh and a nother thing, totally different, is adult fanfiction.net cursed or something? like every few paragraphs there's a stuff up in the spellling or word, it's really freaking annoying. and it's with every fic! have you noticed? or is it just me? Oh well, still reading, can't wait, will review more, baibai!


Midget

Hey there, I'm currently on Chappie 17 (16 by your counting) of your story... I've been reading for a good... oh... HOLY JEEZ! FOUR HOURS?! It's getting late but this story is soooo good. I just can't get enough, I'm glad there's still three chapters left for me to read. But once I get there I'll review again and most likely whine about there not being more..
Right, to the point of this review. In this Chapter which I have just completed I read your rant to a dumb flamer who I presume left a not too nice review which I will most likely read once I send this review and look at the reviews page. And I wanted to let you know that your reply, in itself, was hilarious. And I enjoyed it muchly.
Ooookay, now I'm going to finish this story and hope I get there before the sun comes up (it's late enough to be early).

This is a real review now, not a comment on your funny author's notes.
So, first off, the beginning was alright. I would do something to make a it strongercauscause the rest of your story is so amazing I would hate to think of people not continuing reading it because of the first chapter. You deserve more reviews about just how well written and thought out this story is! Next, congrats on bringing in another generation and twisting the plot line so fabulously. I've read stories in which some poor fool has tried to give Inuyasha and Kagome children, completely changing Inu's personality and producing his kids to be sweet little angels who play ring around the rosy and ask for "stowies". Your portrayal of the twins is fantastic and (this is going to sound weird because this story is based on a cartoon) but realistic. Kiada and Ryu are realistic (in this sense). (On that note, I love Ryu, can I keep him... can I have his phone number?... ;)) Next, the whole Sango and Rin with Naraku idea... magic! It twisted my insides. The rape, the hideous death and angst, tore at me! Very VERY well written.
I\ bit bit biased on your Sess being OC, because I personally enjoying seeing him out of character. So I'm not going to complain about that cause I like it. The characters you introduce are so likeable, I want to togetogether with a bunch of anorexic girls and cheer for them! I am throughly impressed and am looking ever so much forward to the next chapter and ending.

Awsome story!! I've been waiting for someone creative to come along thank gawd!!!! ^_^