rate_review Reviews

YEA NICE STORY WOW LOTS OF SEX PARTS DONT YOU THINK .NOT THAT IM SAYING ITS BAD ...LOL WELL
GREAT STORY AND YOU DID WELL WITH DETIALS ILL TELL YA THAT ..WELL CANT WAIT TILL YOU MAKE ANOTHER STORY IT SHOULD BE ABOUT INUYASHA AND KAGOMES SEX LIFE JUST A SUGGESTION WELL EMIAL ME K AND TELL ME WHEN YOU HAVE ANOTHER STORY UP PLZ B-CUZ I DONT READ MORE THEN 2/4THS OF STORYS HERE SO EMIAL ME AND TELL ME ABOUT IT
AND IN THE THE E-MAIL I ADVISE YOU TO PLZ STATE THAT YOU ARE THE PERSON WHO WROTE THE SESS AND KAG STORY OK
THANXS LOTS .......AND NICE WORK:0

i really enjoyed this story. in fact, i recammend this to anyone who likes Sesshoumaru, and can see past his emotionalless walls.

that was terrific!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! more please write more story!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i beg you!!!!!

ok i like the story actually i love it but.....but....I GOT SO CONFUSED!!!

It was a good story line. But it had a lot of typos & grammar mistakes. It also changed person (going from he/she to i/me). i also felt you kinda rushed it a bit.... if you extended the chapters a little and elaborated a bit more it would be good. However, i will not leave this as a total burn... it was a good story & i liked the plot to it. You left it open to ad more chapters or a sequel, which i really thinnk you should do. i enjoyed it, and i think if you clean up teh grammar & typos a bit it'll be just fine. BTW for a couple of chapters you called him Sesshoumaro not Sesshoumaru.

"Buy the way. You’re nantnant.”

ROFLOL!!!!!!! That line cracked me up! Good job!

great fic!