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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you write a sequel or more to the story I loved it
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It realy hard to understand cause you dont close qoute so please try to do in future
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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
While I think that the story idea is good there are major grammatical and spelling errors that take away from your story.
You need to find a beta to proof read your chapters, believe me this will go a long way to helping readers get through the chapters without having to read them over again.
Keep up the good work!
Jaded
You need to find a beta to proof read your chapters, believe me this will go a long way to helping readers get through the chapters without having to read them over again.
Keep up the good work!
Jaded
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Getting past the typo's I finally got into the story. I'm sure you have more stories in your imagination to beam our way. I like the way you put your love scene in details. You keep on writing, I'll keep on reading. Peace!
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You really should continue the story. Like telling the part were inu-yasha finds out that she is mated to sesshoumaru. Plus you did leave an opening where you said that inu-yasha was going to come back and kill sesshoumaru.
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November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE THIS STORY ! BUT WHAT HAPPNED TO INUYASHA ????? TELL ME !!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story. You have to make a sequel. ;P
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August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thats awesome... but didnt InuYasha vow revenge?
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August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow that story was so awesome! you have to write more stories like that one and e-mail me when you do! well anyways great story but sesshomaru is spelled like that! i gii give you no flames cause that story was awsome!