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that was one of the most realistic portrayls of a truly unattached kagome adn inuyash don dont know why you wouldnt like that part. it perfectly defined the line thats between them: they are acquatinces; nothing more or less right now. you nailed that feeling of awkwardness. kudos. the last part was a bit melodramatic but it was fine anyways. who said a little melodrama is a bad thing?

I noticed! *raises hands* I wonder when they'er gonna be more in touch?
~Melody

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Okay I messed up with the numbers! Okay just want you to know this is the third one. Not the other one. I wonder who the new "friend" is? Is it YAsha?
~Melody

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Awww... poor Kag.. Inu is a jerk. Sometimes.. Welt'st's hard to say...

I like your story so far. It's very interesting, and I hope you explain what those scars mean soon because it's driving me nuts. And, I hope that inuyasha and kagome become a thing.

im guessing that dark haired boy is Shippo? i guess she's gonna screw shippo next right? i feel so bad for inuyasha in this fic

It is worth writing! write away! i thing it is really good...i need to read more!!

ooh another great chapter I had been waiting for an update and was soo happy to see it up..:-) and if ya could I would be ever so gratefull for any email telling me when your next chap is up..btw..is that brown haired boy studing Hojo?? lol...just wondering..anyhow great chap luved it hope to see another update soon..:-) much smies Mija..:-)

I'm really interested in how you're gonna bring about this story. I don't think Kagome sounds like a slut. She sounds to me a girl that is looking for (this sounds corny) love; something deeper then friendship and being the weekend fuck. I'm sure a lot of girls have experenced this. Anyone who says Kagome is a slut from what you've written should take a close look at their male freinds, cause all mine are romance 'em, sleep with 'em, say good bye to 'em. That's why their my friends and not something more. they've made me cynical.

Anywhos update your story soon!! I' want to read the rest. And you can do the italic and bold on this web site. just write in the codes and publish. I could never get my html to work on ff.net. ~-_-~

.^_^. Kei

hmmmm I thought you said Inu wasnt going to be a hanyou in this fic??? ooh well..hehe again I luv this fic and I dont see Kagome as a slut??? sheesh, a gal cant be with a guy and not be labeled a slut??? I understand her confussion, everytime shes with a guy she thinks maybe this time, I think anyhow and then when its not its a total let down...anyway thats how I see it and I think the story is great I cant wait till you update again..:-)