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Very nice piece! I can see this as a one-shot and also a part of a nice long story. I think it's cool that Kagome is thinking about the men in her life;choosing is a part of growing up. I think she should just stick with Inu though. Call me a monogamous.

I hope this isn't a one-shot!!!! Because I want Kagome to end up with Kouga.
I take it that the 'scenes' were her imagination? She needs Kouga to give her some release. Houjo is too boring for her. And Inu-Yasha is running to Kikyo

lol..i LIKED IT!!!!!!!...omg which one of us has never fantisized about the men we are around??? Non related of course..(now that thought is just ewwwwwwwwwww)...and bout time hojo has some time with her..hehe..:-)

Very lyrical, very erotic, very good! It's not so much a story as almost a piece of poetry. Boy, do I know how Kagome is feeling in this fic! I felt the same way at that age (probably felt that way earlier actually, hehe).
I can't see this as more than a one shot, it is more like portrait of a young girls blossoming into womanhood, experiencing desire for the first time (and having wonderfully lascivious fantasies). It's great to see you writing lemons again, I hope you do a long piece like "Dirty Little Secret" or "Dark Desire" again.

I AM HOOKED PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY PLEASE I NEED TO KNOW MORE OF WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!

im a guy, and i really hope my girlfriend doesnt think like that. lol. nice fic