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for Captive Soul

by Strawberries

person RedNeko
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Rasberries, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH!!! I love this story and I want to see how it ends!!!!!
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this a very good story. when is the next chapter coming ..................you did a great job it made me cry you can fell the love and pain of the rin sesshmour and the rest. this sholud be a book it is that good i love it keep up the good work.
person Sess\'s Bewitching Babe
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
pllllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's so sad so far, i want to know what happens so bad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sess's Bewitching Babe
person Hentai Jane
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*jumps around happily* RAS IS BACK RAS IS BACK!!!!!! (Jane hugs poor Ras as she struggles to breathe!) I'm so happy to see you writing again, after the whole ff.net incident. Chapter 42 was great, I cried too so your not the only emotional person around! ;)

Hugs
HJ
person stayingput29
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
review for chap 42.... um well little compliant here.... what do you mean your not going to update for awhile I don't understand..... @_@.... I want more and want more now.... so get with it... he he.... great chap giry as always..... love it...
so you got new story going is that about his son and all.... I hope going to check it out...

Huggle
Mules
person comicfancat
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I keep rereading and rereading this and I cry almost everytime,Please finish your other storys soon so you can work on this one,I just gotta know how you end this.I even have some ideas on a sequel depending on how the last 3 chapters end out,though I love the way this is going the sespence is killing me
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was one of the best stories i have ever read please please i beg you to continue this story .
person theMaven
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Three more chapters! What're you waiting for? Get to writi:( :( Everybody wants that happy ending that we know is coming ^__^ You get major points for originality. And who doesn't love a good Sess and Rin fic? It was a thoroughly decent read from beginning to (almost) end. But, no, I can't muster an ounce of sympathy for Kikyo in this story. She's selfish, conniving and cold-hearted. I just can't feel sorry for somebody like that, especially when she's out to make Sess' life a livingl . l . . . Oh well, it's still a good fic, and you should update as soon as humanly possibly. Oh yeah, I'm glad Sess finally made her stop answering the phone. Rin needs to learn how to prioritize: hot inu youkai who wants to pleasure you, or possible telemarketer? Come on, now. There's no choice. Turn the ringer off and, as Jay from various Kevin Smith movies would say, let's get to the "makin' with the love"--theMaven :)
person Evelyn
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awsome chapter! Sess better be ok! write more soon!! =D
person Nutmeg
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey this chapter was great! Very emotional...I can't blame you for crying, poor Rin and Sess.. *sniff* *tear* But I think this chaptes pls played very well in charactor as well as the others!