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by Strawberries

person Mija
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg Ras you updated!!! YAY! I love this fic...but grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr....I just knew it..just knew Kikyo would come back and find that stupid collar and want to shackle my poor Inu baby...omg can I kill her now?? dont let her get him please dont let her get my Inu...bad Kikyo bad clay pot.. ok ok done ranting bout that...sort of..*grumbles about evil clay pots* anyhow Im soooooo glad Sesshy will live...*does happy dance* I was going to cry if he died, after all that to loose either Sesshy or Rin it would of been heart breaking...nowwwwwwwww...when they wake up there will be a nice little lemon between them right?? hint-hint..hehe...and I know you will take care of that pesky problem about him not being able to have a little Sesshy...*grins* or they can adopt I guess sigh..not the same as have a cute little Sesshy walking around but hey they would love any child that they both shared as mates me thinks..smiles...ok ok im done with dreaming..I just know your going to torture me with an evil next chap or the one after, when ever that witch Kikyo tries to get her hands on my Inu...sigh...but I am totally glad you updated..hehe...great chap and great work as always Ras..much huggles and smiles your fan and friend Mija..:-)
person theMaven
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniff sniff* Do I smell a sequel? ^__^
person Leishkychan
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow you have no update in a really long time i was suprise!!!
well anyway update sooner this time..ok till next time
person New Fan
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You updated I am so happppppy. This was an intense chapter, because I thought
for a moment that he would not accept Rin's request to protect him. I wonder
how he will feel when he finds out that Rin was the one to actually protected and saved
his life.

That Kikyo. You had to put her back into the mix. She a dizzy woman or better yet delusional??!!
Update soon.
person Shadiyaray
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, but when is the lemon with Rin and Sesshie coming?
Kikyo is so mean. Oh no, she is going to use the collar to get Inu!
person tigers_eye
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Loved the ending, where Kikyo gets hold of the restraint. Poor IY better watch out.
person youkai tsuki
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ras,

your writing as usual is excellent. My only complaint is Kikyo,
Kikyo, Kikyo. How dare she even think to entrap InuYasha. You
have now fired up my muse. Thank you for another wonderful
chapter. See you next chapter.


youkai tsuki
person Rkoˆ¨ko
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!! OOOOOOOOOOOOH Sooooo happy!!! I hope Kikyo-bitch gets whats comming to her!! Thank you again for updating Ras!! I have truely fallen for all of your stories. Do you think that Maru will make an apperience in this one?

RedNeko
person DelKaidin
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
RAS!!!!
You aren't going to do what I think you are, are you? Please no... Haven't they had enough trouble? For the record.... I HATE KIKYOU!!!!!
person Yue
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahh!!!!!!NOOO!!!!!!THat cliffie sucked!!!!!!!!!!!!! You better update soon or else......*thinking of threat* OR ELSE!! naw...i can't threaten you....well i just really wanna say please update soon!!!!! I think i'm gonna die of waiting-too-long-syndrome....*falls over in a overly too dramatic dead faint manner* please update soon.........*faint*