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for Captive Soul

by Strawberries

person sharpswords
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yo sharpswords here. im so happy rin wont die i would HATE that (peeks over sholder) mmmmmmmm rin. wake up sharpswords. well i love rin wno ino its the story.blue car pulls up. crap my ex girlfriend found me agian. well see ya!
person Anon
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No update? T-T
person Socks198915
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The best story I have ever read on this site! Please write some more chapters!
person Dragonflares
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story line.......
person shaid
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok, took me all night and most of today to read that... Wasn't planning on reading it, but it turned out to be good... Are you going to finish it?? When?? Because some things need to be finished for Sessh and Rin!! And then the whole Kikyou thing...

It was great, I really loved it.
person RedNeko
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Rasberries, please please please please PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU UPDATE!!!!!!!
person Wolf Gothicka
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yayness!! Sessy & Rin are ok! *does dance* Happy dayz!!
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dang it! I had a really nice review before the server went wonky! * kicks the aff.net server * Damnnantion! Anyhoo, here is the short of the review that I had written...I got to 43 in 2 nights thanks to the short light chapters. Kikyo is a uber bitch. I hope her ass is kicked soon. There...That is the gist of my nice post that I lost thanks to the server error...If it came through and just hasn't shown up yet, I am sorry for that...I hope you can update soon!
person Tiranth
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! Damn that Kikyou. I thought you had gotten rid of the bitch. Grrrr....ok....next chapter please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This one was excellent.
person drake220
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
just when i thought the fic was ending, you pull me back in!
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I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
::happy funky chicken dance::
who-hoo for convoluted plot lines!!!!!!!!!!!!