rate_review Reviews

Man i think i am enjoying this story a little to much if you know what is mean! @_@
please continue the story!!!!!! please i am begging you!!!!!!
(god now i KNOW i am enjoying this story a little to much) (o.k that may be an under statement) ~_~"
hehehe ^_^

aaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!! what an evil place to stop! must... have..... MORE!!!! hehe. actually i like sesshie in this fic. he seems more... human. keep going, i just HAVE to see what happens.

WOOOOOWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I couldn't stop reading this story or the first part to it 'Captured Soul'. I hope I spelled that right. Your descriptions of the actions, emonations, and places were so vivid that I truly picture myself standing in the corner watching all this happen. And feel the pain, anguish, sorrow, and the happiness that they felt. This is probably going to sound weird, but I almost started to cry in some places in this story and much more many in 'Captured Soul'. It was so sad. But I still loved it. I stay up til 2AM reading that story. I can't wait to read the endings both these stories.


P.S. Do you have anymore stories that aren't on this web site? Please let me now if you do. I would love to read them, too.

Good to see you post this story here. I enjoy your work and it will be fun to have it at a site set up for a more mature audience. Update soon.

Update!!!!

WOW!!!!! THAT WAS A GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE DO CONTINUE THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I EALLEALLY ENJOYING THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND THE LAST CHAPTER REALLY GOT TO ME ::sniff:: i really wanted to
BEAT THE $*@+ OUT OF KIKYOU!!!!! :: takes deep breath:: o.k please continue the story please i need to know what happened!!!!!

PLEASE STOP!! WELL NO NOT seriously but I was suppose to be writing term paper and I read thr first chapter of this fic and have lost two hours. SHAME ON FOR WRITING such a deliscious distraction. I shall slink away to my corner now and try to regain my train of thought. BAD ...VERY good author. Keep up the good work. ^ ^