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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE!!! I am dying for the next chapter... cant wait! I love your story so far!!
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July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this. It would be good even if I didn't know anything about inu yasha. I spent the last hour or so reading it. I couldn't tear myself away. I'm dieing to find out what happens. Please please update!!! ^__^
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you absolutely MUST continue this one! It's a good story - strong plot, good grasp of characters, good writing style (I especially appreciate the LACK of spelling errors, typos, poor grammar, and sentence fragments. I've wrestled thru a few stories that would have made your eyes bleed because of this stuff.).
Oh, and yes - do something nasty to Kikyo. Just because she got dumped doesn't give her the right to (for all practical purposes) rape someone else.
Looking forward to the new chapters!
Oh, and yes - do something nasty to Kikyo. Just because she got dumped doesn't give her the right to (for all practical purposes) rape someone else.
Looking forward to the new chapters!
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hello me again!!!!! great chapter just love how you put the plot together!!!!! please continue the story!!!!
::pisst:: ::wispers:: I Hope nothing bad happens so kikyou ::wink:: wink:: XD
bye
::pisst:: ::wispers:: I Hope nothing bad happens so kikyou ::wink:: wink:: XD
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the return of Sess's spirit. He's so wonderfully ful.ful. And so marvelously good about housework cleaning up the blood stain. Inuyasha makes his appearance. Yay. I hope he kills Naraku real good. The Kikyou appearance will make the banquet fun, as will Inu Yasha seing the long lost Sess. Ah the angst, the tension, the potential fluff. So much to look forward to.
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwww i loved the updates...but wants moooooooore...please??? and if ya wants my opinion i think something mean should happen to Kikyo hehe she deserves it for what shes done to poor Sheesh, I cant wait to see how both Inuyasha and Sheesh react when they see each other after 400 yrs??...please update soon, i sooooooo luv this story, great writing great plot...and btw, love the way Sheesh gave a little whine when Rin playfully pushed him outta her room to get dressed..lol..luved it..:-)
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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! Sessho is going to meet Rin's parents, that is so cool! I like the way you brought Inuyasha into this, very creative and, to me, very unexpected!
'Applause' you go girl!
'Applause' you go girl!
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
I wish I could give you a decent review here, but I'm speechless. Truly. This fic has changed a lot since the first incarnation, and definitely for the better. I think you're right in taking it slower...we're getting more of the actual romance of it all. The scene where he purposefully disobeyed her just blew my mind...it was so very very touching! And kudos kudos kudos to you for not throwing them in bed together just yet. I hate seeing poor Sesshou cower from abuse, but the fact that you're willing to keep the premise going gives you major points. Also, I'm very curious as to what you're doing with his backplot. It's clear to me that you've been heavily foreshadowing his noble heritage, but how will it actually be revealed? Naraku seems to know something as well...I hope the slimeball doesn't do anyt too too horrible :P And speaking of slimeballs...one complaint I do have is that Kikyou seems overly Evil so far. I know a lot of people don't like her, but I don't think she's really Evil...just jilted. Leave the Evil to Naraku ^_~ Other than that, this has been a bang-up fanfic so far. Please update soon so I'm not forced to strangle YOU to death...that would be most unfortunate for all involved :(
Cheerio,
Fizzywig
I wish I could give you a decent review here, but I'm speechless. Truly. This fic has changed a lot since the first incarnation, and definitely for the better. I think you're right in taking it slower...we're getting more of the actual romance of it all. The scene where he purposefully disobeyed her just blew my mind...it was so very very touching! And kudos kudos kudos to you for not throwing them in bed together just yet. I hate seeing poor Sesshou cower from abuse, but the fact that you're willing to keep the premise going gives you major points. Also, I'm very curious as to what you're doing with his backplot. It's clear to me that you've been heavily foreshadowing his noble heritage, but how will it actually be revealed? Naraku seems to know something as well...I hope the slimeball doesn't do anyt too too horrible :P And speaking of slimeballs...one complaint I do have is that Kikyou seems overly Evil so far. I know a lot of people don't like her, but I don't think she's really Evil...just jilted. Leave the Evil to Naraku ^_~ Other than that, this has been a bang-up fanfic so far. Please update soon so I'm not forced to strangle YOU to death...that would be most unfortunate for all involved :(
Cheerio,
Fizzywig
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ok im still reading ive barely gotten to chap 13 and i just had to say pooooooooooooooor Shesshy...was never a huge shess fan but i always thought deep down he was a good guy, and to see him like this, sooooo affraid and mistreated??? breaks your heart..(sniffles) and kikyo that *itch...ooh dont like Kikyo and i want her to get it soooooooo bad so off to finish the other chappy so i can see if she gets it i hope soo..grrrrrrrrr and btw greattttttttttt fic i luv it..:-)
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OOH MAN your killing me!!!!!!!!!!! i need more..lol...please update soon i need to know what happens next..(sighs cause i know im impatient but cant help it~pout)....please update soon????