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for Captive Soul

by Strawberries

person l khushrenada
schedule August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
cool.......hope inuyasha and sesshoumaru see each other....
person gerankel
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter as usual! You have no idea how much I'm really enjoying this story. I usually don't read AU stories but this one caught my attention. It's also nice
to see something other than all the yucky Sess/Kagome fics. Ug! What is with that. Just the thought makes me want to revisit my breakfast. In any case, if you ever need
a beta reader i'm available any time. Also I've tve to add your fics to the fanfic section of my website. There is a nice Sess and Sesshoumaru/Rin fanart section if you are
interested in fanart. The url is http://www.angelfire.com/realm3/youkaiwa
Keep up the great work! Can't wait for the next update.....Cynthia
person Mija
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
aackkkk...omg I sooooo luved this chapter, and I understand you wanting them to have a moment together before all hell broke loose, but (whines) I wanted to see what happened when Inu and Shesshy saw each other..(sniffles) ok ok im calm...oh again great chapter luv it..cant wait to read the next one...hehe its gonna be good, (knows Naraku gots somefin planned) bad Naraku, hope Inu kicks his ass..hehe or Shesshy, better yet I hope Rin kicks his butt or Kagome..hehe wouldnt that be cool? having Rin rescue Shesshy??? hehe luv it cant wait to read more..:-) ty for updating
person Luna
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
TY TY for updating!! Please keep up the good work cause this fic seems to be always on my mind. wai wait to read the next chapter!!
person kitten
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello
I love your writing. If you don't mind, may I ask some questions? I wonder how Sess considered someone as his owner? What would msomosomone as his master or not? It could not be only by the legal stuff like paper and things, right? It must be something in the mind to trigger the spell also. For example, now Rin bought him, so she is his owner. Buter ser she released him legally, what make the spell still activated and make him follow her commands? If the spell make him to obey all her commands, what would happen if she order him to be free and follow his mind and heart, not her command? It would be a conflict, wouldn't it? If someone stole him from her, would he need to obey them or she would be his owner still?
Sorry for asking so many questions. I am waiting for your next update. And pray that it will come soon, too.
Good luck and please keep writing.
person sessylover
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ch. 25

yeah u updated!!!!! me sooo happy i really enjoyed this chappy!!!!!!! please continue!!!!!!!! i can't get enough of it!!!!! ^_^
person Talon
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah...I understand. Thank you!! *grins*

Always nice to have some fluff!!!!

I'm dying the the brothers to meet again...please say it will be soon!!!!!
person Talon
schedule August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hn...well I'm not a big fan of het, (I'm a flaming yaoi fangirl) but I really am enjoying this fic, and it's prequel. Excellent work. However, I am wondering if I'm missing something? It says you updated it a day or so ago, but it's the same chapter...chapter 24 I think.

Just wondering if there's been some sort of mix-up...I'm dying to find out what happens at the banquet.

Talon
person nicole
schedule August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey i love this story!!!! please update really soon pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!!!!!!!!!
person zsazsa
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
From what I understand it is going to be happy after the banquet. I thin is is time for them to LEAVE the banquet. lol. PLEASE. Your story is t brt bring on the dirty stuff!!! PLEASE. I love it.