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for Captive Soul

by Strawberries

person Lere
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Flames? No, I love the story so much.... BUT THE WITCH IS SO FALSE WITH THOSE CROCODILE'S TEARS!!!!! GRRRRRRRRR!!!!!

Oh, so, I think I feel better now.

Well, the rest was fine, like allaws. I liked Kagome's good skills. I bet she can kicks Naraku's ass. And I hope Inu can make the right choice for once. Grrrrrr... (deep breath to control my nerves).

I'll be here next time to suport you and the fantastic story.
Hugs.
person Mija
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yaaaaaaaayyyyyy you updated!! yay yay yay...and your reader was right very dramatic and sooooooo luved it...awwwwwwww Inu called Sesshy brother...going to cry...but aaacckkk cliffy??? no no no...needs more please update this soon k?? pretty please?? must know what is going on and how they save Sesshy..they do save him right??? huggs Mija..:-)
person Laydhwk
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are WELL worth the wait!!!! I absolutely LOVE this story!!! I read it just before going to work this morning , and have thought of nothing else since! How will they save Sess....? How will they defeat Narako....? Such suspense and action! Truely edge of my seat kinda stuff!!! And of course how will Inu-Yasha and Sess feel about seeing each other again???? Oh, how the mind does whorl, spin and ponder!!!!! Such a sweet moment when Sess immediatly put down his swords for Rin's life and equally sweet was when she was willing to give 'everything' *yuck by the way* to Narako for Sess's life - * Major big sigh*

I like that we are made to wait for the *lemon* between Sess and Rin - I look forward to it being a very sweet moment. The build up between the two is good, nice foreplay, longing and learning trust........*sigh, again*

As ALWAYS I am looking foreward GREATLY to your next chapter!!!!!
person Sister Raven
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, as I read more of this, my wonderment aespeespect continue to grow. Your lt cht chapter had me on the edge of my seat...I mean that quite literally, as I found that I was edging further and further forward as the story progressed. And like the junkie I am, I can't wait for my next fix! Keep up the great work.
person Luna
schedule September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GAWD!!!!!!! You are killing me with all the cliffhangers!! But I must admit that I am LOVING every minute of it!!! its like sweet torture so like the dog I am.. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!!! Im begging you!! lol I hope I have expressed how much I am loving your fic!!!
person gerankel
schedule September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter as usual! Captured Soul is the main reason I even really visit this site anymore. Sorry I haven't gotton back to you be noe now about putting your
story(ies my my site. Life has been hectic bit I'm sure you know how that is. I should be contacting you tomorrow about getting your work on the site. Again great job!
person fyyrrose
schedule September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a personal of Rin and Sess, but I love your story! If I have ever wanted to kill Kikiyou, I REALLY want that P.O.S. DEAD!!! ^____^ Now you HAVE to keep writing, because I need to know the next segment....I'm dying to know!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write....*evil gleam* otherwise...no I said no death threats.....*sweet smile* please continue, I'm looking forward to it.
person Avatar0507
schedule September 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i just recently read your last 27 chapters of this story and all i can say is i want chapter 28 and i want it soon!!! lol, i thinkis gis great, i really couldn't take my eyes away from my monitor while i was reading it. i think you have done a great job here and i am very anxious to see more of this story soon. the way you have waited for the lemon has gotten me (and i am sure a few other readers as well) just bursting for some seeshoumaru/rin action. well, like i said please post soon, i keep checking back to see if you have posted but nothing new yet :( once again, good job and keep up the good work. peace
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*screams wildly* Another great chapter. Utmost respecre. re. Sesshomaru has a very dirty mouth [lol] very cool indeed. Kikyo bitch deserves it for messin with him ^___^. Kagome fought back! Inuyasha notices Kagome! He notices her as a woman! Another great aspect! *sips more wine* Naraku! Evil does good deeds in this fic! Strong descriptive emotions....its there...Oh no......it can't be.....ANOTHER CLIFF HANGER! *sigh* Thanks for the wonderful chapter. Its not often that I read fanfics so well and dramtically written. I just started reading fanfics again around this month! [I had them on hold for a few months] Please continue, I'll try to keepprompromise to continuing reading this kool fic.
*smoochies*

A very moody,

BlueSaiyanChick
person Lease242
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to tell you that finding a good Sess & Kagome story....a truly enjoyable story, one that grabs you and keeps you coming back with your fingers crossed....... looking for that update.... is becoming increasingly rare. This is one of thoses rare stories.......keep on writing!! I envy your mastery at capturing an ORIGINAL page-turning storyline.