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for Captive Soul

by Strawberries

person Mija
schedule September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yeah!!! you updated..yay yay yay I sooo love this story..ooh and the battle?? totally awsome and the love scene, totally perfect and her virginty still in tact..that was..wow great..and awwwww Sesshy spoke to Inu, if only to give him an order..lol..he still acknowledged him..hehe I soo cant wait till Inu and Sesshy talk, will Sesshy talk to him or ignore him??? sighs..and does Inu still love Kikyo??? soo many questions and wonderings..ooh please update soon k?? pretty please with Rasberries on top?? (giggles) huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person Oberon
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story is one of the best on AFF dare I say the net.

I do have a question though..kikykikyo evil in this fic, I know you have answered it before, but she seems down right sadistic...

I love the way Sesshoumaru is protrayed in the last few chapters, you can picture his old manners returning. Thats how I see it

I also love the way you have naraku fearing Kagome, very "and the plot thickens"
person Leiliiani
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
EEEP! If you don't update soon, I think I might pop!
I both hate anve tve this story, being hopelessly obsessed with Sesshoumaru, I can't stand seeing him reduced to a broken slave, but I'm VERY glad he has the chance to be free and be with Rin. ^_^
And I'd also like to add that Kikyou is a vile and nasty cold-hearted bitch, and I hope she dies a slow painful death *nodnod*. She and Naraku should hook up, they're perfect for one another *nodnod*
ANyhoos, Update soon.. I'll be waiting!

~Leiliiani
person Soulchan
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Waii!! ::glomps Ras in crazy fan-girl way:: You have no idea how much I have enjoyed this story. I usually review after each chapter, but I found myself unable to stop reading! Finally a story that treats Sesshy in the way he deserves! Most either portray him as totally heartless or completely OOC. You on the other hand have crafted a marvelous story that makes me cry with how romantic and poignant it is. This is the sto story I have read in ages and it has renewed my waning interest in fanfiction. Please up date soon: I hate cliffhangers! ::sobs::
Soul~chan
person Miyu
schedule September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
can't believe that i passed over your story several times because i couldn't stand the thought of sesshy being a slave to anyone. thank goodness for the shortage of good new sess fics or else i wouldn't have given yours a try. REALLY glad i did. PLEASE update soon
-miyu
person Luna
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YOUR KILLING ME WITH THE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!! TY TY for updating so soon but please dont leave me hanging for too long, my mind tends to think the worst. I have to say that this is one of my FAVORITE stories I have ever read. Please please update again!!! Your DEVOTED reader!!
person dragonflyelj
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter! You torture me with your cliffhangers! I want more! I believe this is now my favorite fan-fic. And about Kikyo, just kill the b!tch already! LOL. No, I had no problems with where you went with the whole Kikyo thing, it was the perfect set-up for her to have a spiteful jealous fit of rage when...ERR if IY and Kagome hook up. You are gonna make those two hook up right? I will be waiting for the next chapter to find out!
person apocalypse
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!! this is the most wonderful fic!!!! usually i get bored after reading a few chapters but i couldn't stop reading this one!!! please update soon!!!!!!!!!!

luv,
apocalypse
person meny
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hello
person BlueSaiyanChick
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh no-no-no-no-no*puts hand over mouth* Its line one of my novelas! But even better! Ahhh. You should ly hly have some tv series, then I wouldn't be hogging the phone line and missing calls ^___^ I had tears wilding up my eyes; too dramatic. especially when you wrote the sentences almost near the end serperately, basic genius. It was actually great 'cause I was scrolling slowly bit by bit at that point. Too perfect. Jumping around;excited. As wat wat watches her soaps, I have to say, this typed novela is too inspiring. InuYasha sees his brother, in vividly described detailed text, formatted to touch emotion. Very impressed. Kikyo hugged Inuyasha! That bitch! I hate her, it was her bitchy fault they broke up [It will stay like that in my mind] and she was seducing Sesshomaru AND being the victim??!! @_@ That 2 dollar hoe needs to get a life if she thinks she'll even hook up with the silver-haired hanyou. She juspiecpiece of stu stuck on his ELITE foot. A thorn on his side, a fly in his soup, you get the point. Well that's the only flame you'll need to burn out. At least it was put into a strange amusing way. Please continue, I'm glad you're dedicated to your stories unlike SOMEONE *cough* me *cough* Well let's see how this reunion will really turn out between these sexy ass brothers. 29 chapter I do not expect soon, beautiful chapters take up ideal, golden, and memoriable time. Just effort, just don't rush things, take the accumilated pace of your choice.


Excuse-my-frenchy-ghetto-slang-in-one-of-my-lengthy-reviews,

BlueSaiyanChick