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for Captive Soul

by Strawberries

person Miyu
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ch31. so glad sess is accepted by rin's parents. please update soon. i gotta know what happens w/ the curse. still lovin' your story.
person Hentai Jane
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A living death? THAT IS SO COOL!!! I can't wait to see how Rin and Sess figure a way out of this situation. Great fic! TTFN
person Ame
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Arrrggg!!! What a cliffhanger!!!! This story is great, please don't leave us hanging for too long!!! Poor Rin and Sess!! And I want to see Kikyo get knocked on her butt again, shameless hussy. This is just too good!

Ame
person dragonflyelj
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see how they will free Sess. If I know Rin, she will want to free him anyway, and he won't want her to do it, if she tells him. Until your next update.
person Aya Rei
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Gah!!!!! It took you long enough to up-date and now?!!!!!! *sobs in corner* no but seriously you cant keep holding me on the edge like that! Its so not f... ... just please up date a bit sooner Ne?? Good job tho, yup yup (Aya's muse agress*pokes Aya for ignoring her muse* But i want to keep reading and not draw yet!!!!!) uhh sorry about that yea... I have the urge to draw, but i just wanna read!!!! ^_^ Ja Ne (no more caffiene for me today hehehe)
person Fluffy Fan
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM

Waaaaiiiii

I've only just found this but I love it, Sessy/rin isn't my fav pairing but they go together so well in this ;_; now all I want is the rest of it. *hopes it'll be released soon*
person nicole
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
run..............Run................RRRUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNN for i will hunt you down and feed you to my pet dragon. i will never forgive you for doing this to one of my fav. couples. if you right another story like this again..................I WILL PUT THE SAME CALLER THAT SESSY HAS ON YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Nekiochan
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
CLIFFY!!!!!!!
I hate cliffys.....

But..............

What will happen to Rin when she finds out? What will happen to Sess? There has to be a way. Maybe someone will appear and take the collar off?

Maybe....................?

[ o.O ]
sualsually don't say this to authors, but. "Please hurry up on the next chapter, I'm deing to know."

Anways, Keep up the good work!!!!!!
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, IT ENDED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

okay, now let me get this all figured out. rin has to be a VIRGIN for this to work... didn't she lose her virginity????

?.?
person New Fan
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter. Especially the "brotherly love" conversation between Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru. You would think after not seeing each other for over 500 years the hatered between them will diminished. Well, I guess not. Looking forward to read the next chapter. Update sooooon.