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for Captive Soul

by Strawberries

person Shinokun
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this.
person Ame
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I got an idea, make that bitch Kikyo take the restraint off. That way Rin and Sess can live happily ever after, and that miko bitch can die a slow horrible death!!!

Looking forward to more!

Ame
person SD
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohh! I loveeeeee that newest chapter! s sos sooo sweet...Kikyo ruined it a bit tho..*sigh* Update soon!
person tigers_eye
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Have enjoyed both your stories, Cred red & Captive Soul. Can't wait to see how this one concludes. Have to admit, would like to see Kikyo get one more crack @ Sesshomaru; all kinds of implications w/ that. She could use him to indirectly attack Inuyasha (if she found out they're related), or Rin, or just cuz she has a burr up her ass. Be interesting for it to take place in Rin's own home, in her own bed. Be a way of saying Rin is no proof against her. Anyway, just a suggestion tossed out. Keep it up. Itching for the rest.
person Luna
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHat are you doing to me??!!! This is torture!!!!! *rubs her eyes to gain her mental thoughts back* You just HAD to throw a new twist in there didnt you?!!! Well.... I love you for it!! LOL I have said it before and I will say it again.. I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Please update again soon!!
person stayingput29
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey Ras, (waves) I just read cpatured Soul and now OH BOY I have a big question??? Will his son be showing up in this fic... OH I must know...You gave us no more information on them did him Liana live what became of them now I am curious about that i want to know the sons name and if he will show up in this one... by the way very good fic I read it from beginning to end It had me hooked couldn't leave my chair... But please do tell me what has become of his Son I sooooo want to know... ts ,.s ,.. love and :)'s... Mules
person stayingput29
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YIPEEEEE!!!! Got to just love updates... Killer Chap... but OH NO!! what will Rin do will she insist on doing it but not tell Sess what will happen and can't he just bring her back??? I must know... lol... when Kagome answered the door I thought it was going to be Inu.... fooled me... and then to end in yet another hot spot... I want more I must know what happens.... I was so happy to see this update so soon .... thank you.... Mules
person Mija
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwww sniffles thats not fair...they cant free Sesshy??? going to cry now...sobs...and Kagome is thinking of Inu huh?? is Inu thinking of her?? does he still Love Kikyo??? ooh has to know must find out more please give me more...pretty please update soon??? please?? will share my cookies???? till laters oh btw totally awsome chap as usual..love it!!! huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person Sister Raven Dreamer
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, Rasberries! You just love torturing your characters, don't you? And we love reading it, of course.
Hmmm, living death. So that's what Sessy's dream was about. Now, if I guess correctly, Rin will still want to risk everything to get that collar off, and Sess will be completely against it. That's my guess, anyway. Well, Please update soon!
person New Fan
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great has usual. But, you had to make things more difficult for our beloved characters. Knowing how Sess feels about making Rin his mate in demon terms. With that impossible spell they must break he can never make her his mate as well as not allowing her go through the procedure. I think when Rin finds out the consequences on freeing Sess she will not tell him and he will not find out until it is to late. This story has too much twist and turns that can end up for our beloved character with a happy ending or with a whole lot of heartache. Can not wait to you update. Update soon.