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I knew that was come about once Rin finds out about that collar. The thing that really gets me going is that Kikyo chick. She has some serious issues and Rin needs to take care of that once and for all. Its is to bad that the curse of the neck band can not be transferred to someone else. I mean that some one can not take Rin's place. An even trade off in which Kikyo is the trade off. I know that really bad to think that way, but she really asking for it. Great work as usual and looking forward to chapter 33.

New Fan

Please give me some hope that you're gonna kill off Kikyou...nice and painful? I actually have no qualms about Kikyou tormenting Kagome, I think it's funny, but I see Rin as not being able to defend herself. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Keep plotting and writing! ^_~ till next time

Like most of the story, but the Kikyo stuff is just too repetetive. She shows up, demands, he resists, gives in, Rin shows up made with possible misunderstanding. Better just to get rid of it or waste less space on it because other than that the storyline is great.

Chapter 32 rocked!!!! I love the way you made Sesshomaru so sexy and playful, but still serious and dignified.

Ok, Kikyo must die! That bitch needs a whoopin' more than anything and I hope it's Rin that will dish it out.

TTFN
HJ

Rasberries,
If we, your reviewers, are able to guess some things about your story, it is not because you are being predictable. Rather, it is because you have made theractracters so lifelike, and your characterization was so thorough, that I feel I know them. And, in knowing them, I can guess what their reactions will be to certian situations. So, rather than think you are predicable, you should instead see it as a testament to your skill as a writer. Well, that's my opinion, anyway. I am thoroughly enjoying this fiction, and I get all excited when there's a new update. So, understanding that good writing takes time, I will wait (with what little patience I can muster) for your next chapter.
Sister Raven Dreamer

Another great chappie, OMG, I don't wanna wait for the next one! OK, curbing my enthusiasm. I can be patient, don't wantrushrush your creative process.

really?? Inu/Kag action coming?? omg omg...too cool I was sure it would of course be rin sess but Inu and Kik sort of thing...I know I hate her..sigh..and after reading that chap I really really hate her...but I thought couse of Inu u would end up making it a kik inu thingy but sooooooo glad you decided a kag and Inu thingy althoug it is based on a Rin Sess thingy..damn that Kikyo wants to hurt her really realy bad..will you please please let someone come before Sess has to succomb to that evil *itches wishes??? if not Rin then let it be Inu, let him be coming to talk to Sess alone and find Kikyo being a *itch and get her away from sess.,..and ooh ya I do want to read about his pup and his first mate Liana..is that right?? ooh anyway You know how much I luv this fic and I look soo foward to everyone of your updates...cant wait..(rubs hands in anticipation) till laters you be well safe and happy,,(offers more cookies) huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GO BLACK DRAGON GO!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOUR MASTER WISHES TO SEE RAS DEAD!!!!!!!!! NOW GO AND KILL HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HATE YOU RAS!!! I HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey Ras, (waves) Great Chap as always... I knew she would keep that secret from him.. But that damn kikyo is back... OH NO!! I can't wait to see what happens next... and no he can't bring her back so that means she does die... Yes... No... I need more... I am glad you are writing a story about Liana and his pup.. I can't wait to read it... I think your doing a wanderful job. You always leave me wanting more and more and more... I hope to see an update on this soon... and your other story too... Great Job... OH yeah looking forward to a little Inu/kag action myself... Yipeee!!!.... Mules

ch 32. another great chap. oh how you make my heart flutter when they are together. don't let kikyou get her way w/ him.