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for Captive Soul

by Strawberries

person New Fan
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was very interesting especially between Kikyo and Sess. Now I know she really has lost her mind. It was amazing that Sess did not figure out about Rin's distress soon. Is it because of her miko powers he did not sense it sooner. Looking forward to Chapter 34. Update soon.
person fyyrrose
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sob* ok so you won't kill kikyo, that's ok, I'll just imagine her death. Another great chapter! I want you to get to the chapter that removes the neck brace! Any clue as to how much further you have to go? Anyway, as to your question at the beginning, I like violence, so I'd take rated R, but I won't hold it against you if it'll stay PG-13. You can't lose me as a reader that fast! Keep it up! I love seeing your updates ^_~

Fyyrrose
person Tiranth
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*kicks Kikyou in the arse as she leaves* That's right you...you...poopyhead, leave Se alone. That scene between Kagome and Inu was just too kawaii. So I wonder whats going to happen...hmm...*sighs* I guess I'll have to wait huh? Great chapter!!!!
person MomOfFluffyAndFluffier
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Actually I really want to see Rin & Ses happy and Kag & Yasha happy...and Kikyo get it in the end...
person Riomi
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG You have no idea how much i love this story! From the second i laid eyes on your prelude i feel in love... i know i sound creepy..XD
You have to update and i mean update soon, when i say soon i mean now, when i say now i hurry the hell up! Sorry i'm just really connected to your story now and can hardly wait.

Q: I was wonderin' if you are going to have Sess go all the way with Kikyo this time... Honestly i don't want that but it would be interesting to see the reaction of the others you know? sorry I'm rambling now... Please update soon, you have a true talent.

XD Riomi XD
person Taty_chan
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Could someone, please, KILL kikio??????

PLEASE!!!!!

I really hete this b****
person ami
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! omg, you have got to update soon!! the suspense is killing me! what will happen to rin ansshosshoumaru? and what is that kikiyo planning?! i am really enjoying your fic, please update soon i cannot wait to read what happens next. WOW you are a wonderful writer, keep up the good work! ^_^
person Evelyn
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Girl, chapter 32 rocked! i am absolutely lovin' your story! you an aan amazing writer.
you have got to update soon, i just cannot wait to see what happens next! Please,
Please update soon!! I am telling you though, that that bitch kikiyo has got to die!!!
I hate her so much! it serves her right that inuyasha dumped her! HA!! anyways sorry for blabbing,
great story can can't wait for further updatese yae ya^ Ev^
person EVELYN
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!! IT'S THE MOST WONDERFUL RIN AND SESSHOUMARU STORY I HAVE EVER READ!! WOW!!! eEVN THOUGH IM NOT EXACTLY DONE YET, I CAN SO NOT WAIT TO FINISH IT! YOU ARE A WONDERFUL WRITER!!
person pratz
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i'm fed up with that b***h going around! why don't ya just kick her off out there?! anyway, what ya ya gonna do with this storm of emotions hanging around? i think i'd like not to see my soon-to-be mate die neither to see my loved one in another's woman arms... why don't ya send inuyasha to help him ^_^, show me he's a good bro!