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great new chapter. very interesting, got a little caught off guard tho with kikiyo
i totally thought she would make sessy do something naughty. please update soon.

Eh.. okay it's fine not to like Kikyou but you should at the very least keep her in some semblence of character. I know this is a AU BUT..the point of those types of stories is the same characters with the same personalities in an alternate world. This story is less a AU and more a peice of orginal fiction with the names from the anime ganked. That said your over all writing is not bad. I just can't see the characters I love in your potrayal. Sesshoumaru actually does seem to be slipping into character.. but I wonder why.. since after all he's been abused for 500years.. If I remember correctly he flinched any time he thought he upset Rin. He's made the transition from victum to hero a bit to quickly. The dramatical impact was lost as well as tons potential angst when he was once again the calm, stoic youkai lord when his brother met him. I was dissapointed. It would have made a greater impact as well as been more realistic to find the battered, shamed Sesshoumaru that I pitied in the begining of this story.

Another great chapter! can't wait for 34! Even though this is a long story, you keep the reader interested. The story does not feel like it is dragging on, as happens with other stories. Everytime I see you have updated, I get a little thrill (Ohhh, a new chapter to read!) hehe. ok, well until the next update, take care.
dragonflyelj

Thanks for updating!!! I was thrilled to find a new chapter this morning!!!

omg you just know Kikyo wants to bind Inuyasha to her like Sess is bound to his master or mistress..please please dont tell me she succeds??? and awwwwwww poor Rin hiding what she feels from Sess for him, and him knowing shes hiding something..sniffles and poor Kagome but I knew she would find a way outta it for her..hehe and oooh yes me likes this alot, lots of Inu and Kag..me likes a whole bunch..I just knew he couldnt resist her..(smiles) but still wondering what happened between Inu and Kikyo to make him leave her?? hmmmmm lots of questions and soooo loving this story soo update soon k?? pretty please??? will give ya a whole bunch of halloween candies???..ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-) btw if you couldnt tell another awsome chap...I LOVED IT!

OH HELL YES!!!! I think I hate her more now then before because now I know she'll make Kagome's life a living hell!!!! The damn bitch!!!!!!! But that quick kiss fix my mood. Did you remember: Kag&Inu for ever??? And what about Kikyou and Sess's course? Very suspicious I must say.

Well, about the other story. R is fine because I think your stories follow that pat since the begining. I can't wait to read that too.

So, hugs from Brazil!

Ras, you were giving me anxiety throughout the whole kikyou/sess incident. now that sess has found rin, i don't want anyone else tainting him. very glad you ended it the way you did. i'm a huge kikyou symizerizer and don't like how she's always characterized as a super bitch. i'm sure you have justifications for her behavior bcs your characterizations have depth. and a person who can love another deeply can't be all that bad (referring to kikyou's love for inu)

Wow...I feel honored that you responded to my review... Well lets see i have to that this chapter was sooooooooo good. i cant wait til you update. Now as usaul i have a question...

Q: Will you have Shippou meet Sesshoumaru...and have Sessy recognize him from when he saved him all those years ago (back in Captured Soul)?

And i think that Kikyou might Use Sessy to get back Inuyasha... maybe to make him somewhat jelous...who knows.

Please fill us in soon. And if you get a chance please check out my Story Torn. I would love to know what you think...XD

Riomi

Wow...I feel honored that you responded to my rev.. W.. Well lets see i have to that this chapter was sooooooooo good. i cant wait til you update. Now as usaul i have a question...

Q: Will you have Shippou meet Sesshoumaru...and have Sessy recognize him from when he saved him all those years ago (back in Captured Soul)?

And i think that Kikyou might Use Sessy to get back at Inuyasha... maybe to make him somewhat jelous...who knows.

Please fill us in soon. And if you get a chance please check out my Story Torn. I would love to know what you think...XD

Riomi

Another great Chap Ras.... thank you for the update... But I wander what Kagome is up to... did she find another way... Me wants to know... Will the next chap be the restraint taking off chap... Well either way Killer Job as always... Keep it up... Mules