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Hey, i really love the story i just didn't know the removal spell would be so soon. i'm glad you did. really good and interesting chapter. can't wait to read the next chapter looking forward to it.

Told ya last night I loved this chapter... But here it is again! The fluff between the two couples was sweet! I enjoyed very much. Now to patiently wait for the next chapter... But I will ask you on the chat...

Ok, first of all, I'm so happy to see Kagome and Inuyasha hitting it off. Second, I can't wait for Sesshomaru to finally be free. Not only will he get his freedom but some well needed 'lovin' from Rin ;)!! This was another great chapter that I so enjoyed reading. Keep up the good work Ras!
Hugs
HJ

Why I am not surprise you was going to pull this one out of your hat. What I am referring to is the statement that Kagome said to Inuyasha about untrained miko could hurt or purify youkai and houyou. Not only can Rin get hurt but Sesshoumaru as well. Does not look good for our dual. Update soon.

The honey is the only way to get the ants anywhere near her willingly, but
you're right. It is a waste of good honey. I know I'd never go near her
unless I got to cause her severe and painful harm. But, hey, I'm vicious
like that.

I like this one. Kag & Inu fluff. Doncha just wanna pet those ears? I know I
do. I wonder if he thumps his foot when someone scratches behind them. I
also wonder if Sesshoumaru chases his tail when he's in full Inu Yokai form.
(Blame Nefra for that Sessy image. She did it first. The Inu one was from
someone else. I don'tembeember her name at the moment tho.)

Sexy Sessy's gonna get freed! *Does Snoopy Dance* I know I look goofy when
I do that, but I like it. I wonder if they're gonna find Sessy's little boy. (Yes, I
read the prequel, *finally*) Well, he ain't so lil' anymore, but you get my point.

Ja,
CybrEmly01

Ras you are evil you really are now i have to wate another week for more *pout*. any who good job. keep up the good work lol


Naheta

Rasberries - you are such a talented writer!! I truly enjoy reading your stories and I don't even mind waiting for your updates because I know I will not be disappointed. You can always tell when someone just throws a story together. This story has invaded my life and I dread the end of it.

Nice tension spike with the salt incident for for one,(may it count)(*throws salt over sholder*, ha ha) really enjoyed you taking the time to evolve Kag and Inu's interaction together, I thought it turned out very real. And, am I detecting an enuendo that Inu's kind of detective experinece may give us (really Sessh) something to look forward to? Ah, will Sessh wise up and not tick his brother (Sessh "spits" at the mention of the word) off, or he might have to ask Inu for his help (SAY WHAT?! HAVE TO SWALLOW HIS PRIDE SOME?!?! HIM??!!) very, very OOC! But it would be fun to see!

Ras...what can I say? I'm hanging on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update.Oh my gosh! The suspense just might kill me,lol. I can't wait, see you next time.

Huggles;
Khell

It took me a while to read both of your stories (Captured Soul and Captive Soul), but I like the plot and the way the stories flow. I have several questions, but they may have been answered already:

1. In Captured Soul, you mentioned that Sesshoumaru had a son. Did the son live, and if so, will he reappear in your current story Captive Soul?

2. Is the evil miko dead? If so, is Kikyo her reincarnation?

3. If the collar is removed, is there a chance that it can be attached to either Rin, Kagome, or Inuyasha?