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by Strawberries

person Blue Saiyan Angel
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Wow, gotta hand it to ya, I'm not a Sess/Rin fan, but I like the way you have portrayed them in your fic. It doesn't give the 'she's his kid and the whole incest feel to it'. I am a little concerned a the the status of AFF.net. Do you post your stories on another site? I am going to email you with my return address. If you would, please let me know if there is another site. I would like to see the continuation of the Kag/Inu storyline. It seems so cute and fluffy. Oh, and one last note. I really hope you have something good in store for Kikyo. She doesn't deserve a happy ending after what she has put Sess through. TTFN!
person Mija
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwww Ras your killing meeeeeeeeee..ive waited soo long for this moment and ya leave me hanging..*grabs hair and pulls at it*..ok ok im calm sigh...as usual this was a terrific chap..loved the playfull nervous scene between Inu and Kag and ya the traditional clothes made a great pic in my head to..I could just see it...and I just knew it...I knew the little itch was slinking around somewhere..awwwwww hope she dont ruin the ritual to take Sesshy's collar off..and hmmm the weather??? may that be Pandora being pissed off??? ok Im reaching but ya never know..and if this is how you write when your muse is on vacation then gf your alot better than I ever thought..this was awsome loved it all...sooo cant wait to read more..*hint-* he* hehe..anyhow you be well safe and good gf..and have a very good but safe New Years Eve! huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person Rhiannonencourages
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You're doing really well, even if you believe your muse is missing. I do hope you update again soon! BTW, don't demons regenerate their fangs when they remove them to be used for weapon making? Perhaps with the collar removed, Sess can use some of this repressed demon power to regenerate his... you know.
person aya_rei
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
TORTURE!!!! you know thats what your doing to me?!!!! enough with the build up, i know you know how this is going to end, and i want to know too!!!! up date soon please ^_^
person VampireMiyu
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i'm so thrilled you updated!
great chapter as always
can't wait for what happens next
i like how you're making sess's
character evolve as he nears being released.
but it's still sweet that he's warm w/ rin even
if he's not warm w/ others.
-miyu
person Lease242
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story keeps getting better and better. Your story is by far one of the most well-written stories I have read and I think I have read them all. lol Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Hentai Jane
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW Ras, that chapter was awesome. I sat on the edge of my seat this whole time! When you say 'next installment' do you mean that you're going to write a another fic about Inuyasha and Kagome's blooming romance? If you do, I hope Kikyo gets her ass whooped!
person tigers_eye
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. Loved the 1st part: try to explain what love is. That's one I thought on myself, in case I ever have kids. Anyway, getting anxious to see what happens w/ this removal ritual. Looking forward to it.
person New Fan
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sooo, the old miko is alive. Mmmmm, makes the story so much interesting and the plot thicken. Sess wanted to kill her for what she done as well as Rin. Will he have his revenge is she still at the site where captured the youkai or is she is traveling capturing youkai? Update soon.
person KhellendrostheDragon
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hiya Ras; OMG!! A cliffhanger! I don't know if I'll be able to handle the suspense...I can't wait to read the rest.
Plz, update soon
Huggles;

Khell