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for Captive Soul

by Strawberries

person ARacquer
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just figured I'd let you know that your story is utterly captivating. I came upon it by accident and ended up reading the first 31 chapters before I could stop! The storyline is so imaginative and completely unique. I can't wait to see how the whole thing turns out. I hope to finish it very soon :)

Thanks,
Aubrey
person Mules
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ummmmmmmm Rass dear.... the second half of the chap is missing.... HELLO Girly..... I am missing second half of chap 37... Don't make me result to name calling there .... Double Whip Rass.... Don't make me do it.....

Killer Chap and i am back to reading so you better get back to updating.... Well off to catch up on more reading.... OH yeah missed ya in chat last night maybe see ya tonight...

Huggles Girly... Hope all is well in your neck of the world....
person Mules
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Rass... (waves and Huggles)... I know long time no read... but finally have some me time.... I just read chap 35 and I so want Inu to growl at me.... You know this right..... GRRRRRRRRRRR.... come on boy.... OMG.... I smiled and giggled when I read that... like a flirty little school girl..... Killer Chap and moving on to next one..... Hope to chat with ya soon.... Huggles girly
person Mules
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Chap as always...... Chap 36 complette.... And I like the growing Inu/Kag relationship.... Huggles
person Riomi
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again another magnifecent chappy! I can't wait til you updat and I love the way Inu and Kag
relationship is going...
Also I can't wait til you update the Liana story, that is going great btw.

Oh yeah! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let out Sesshou-kun have pups, the world would be such a better place....LMAO

Oh well cant say I never a... ... or pleaded...

Riomi
person Reiku
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh, Well, I probably really don't want to know this but how did Pandora 'fix' Sesshoumaru. If she castrated him he would not be able to ahem..'perform' and seeings how other methods of male sterilization were not around then.. I'm a nitpicker by nature...and the whole Sess not being able to have kids got me to thinking. (That's a good thing) If the collar was removed, I think Sesshou would likely be able to regenerate the lost um...*blush* I mean Inuyasha regrew his eye after Sesshou poked it out. Yes, I really do have too much time on my hands=)
person golden
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaahhhhhh!!! plz write more i want to know what happens next...i hate cliffys cuz i cant get enough of the storys! PLZ write more ^.^
golden ^.^
person liberatedmysterygirl
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please write another chapter soon , im really cruiouse to see what happends
person Diane
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Has this been updated & I just can't see it or something? It's been at the top of the 1st IY page on AFF [where new new stuff & updated fics are supposed to be] twice & both times the last chapter posted was 37 which was the newest 1 posted several months ago & I've already read it. I'd like to read 38 & 39 already.
person Taiki
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*waaaahhhh* Ras Hun! What have you done?? I cant be away for one week right? *lol* Oh my God - I think you captured the emotions very well. The Dialog about Love between Sess and Rin its was sooo sweet. My Hearts feels heavy now.. *sigh* Ok, I will come online to the chat tonight. My Fam has left and I got my Freetime back!!! *yay* See ya then *huggs and love* Taiki