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for Captive Soul

by Strawberries

person Aub
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have got to quite doing this!!!!!!! These chr enr endings are way too intense, and then we have to wait days to see the next one?! You're like some spellcaster with a macabre sense of humor who gets her readers completely engrossed and then leaves them dangling by their toes. Uugh. Oh well. I guess I have no choice but to follow blindly. Can't wait foturdturday.

Aubrey
person Tiranth
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ras??? How could you do this to me?? I thought we would see the collar come off or something...no fair *starts to pout* Oh well that won't get me anywhere will it? Anyhoo...I can't wait to see the next chapter, this one was spectacular as usual.
person Naheta
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pouts i might put you on my evil cliffy list *sigh* but i guess i cant lol i love the story too much lol


Naheta
person anhimals
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i usually read this story on ff.net but some reason whenever i click on it it says chapter does not exsist. i was so sad when that screen poped up but then i remember u are always on aff.net so here i am. i have been waiting for so long to see what happens next but yet u held a lil bit back. it was a gooapteapter. you did satisfy my need of the next chapter. so update soon and let us know if it is a success and that they will live happily ever after. update soon! =)
person Mija
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
first Ras let me say omg YAYYYYYY!!!!!!...you updated this story..ya know it was one of the first fan fics I read on AFF and Ive loved it ever since and have been waiting for more...*does happy dance* glad for the new update and I would be ranting and bawling at the cliffy if ya hadnt said that 39 and 40 would be out in a few days..*does another happy dance* as always Ras you are sooooooo talented this story is totally awsome..Im biting my nails praying nothing will go wrong and Sesshy will be free and Rin safe..and hoping Kikyo dont get her grubby little hands on that collar and anywhere near my Inu...grrrrrrrrrrr..ok ok Im calm..again another totally fantastic chapter Ras cant wait to read more till later and in chat huggles and smiles and luvs your friend and fan Mija..:-)
person Blue Saiyan Angel
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chpt.38- Hiya! Oh, such suspense. Bad authoress, bad, bad bad! Is Inu Yasha going to have some role to play in the removing of the spell/collar? The changing of character thoughts weren't too hard to keep up with. It was kinda interesting. Update soon, and no cliffy this time.
person VampireMiyu
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gosh, i was soo tense during that chapter. so excited to find out what happens.
great chapter. update soon. i still love after thirty some chapters.
person New Fan
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the chapter. I just wondering about the 'weather' one minute wind is picking up and thunder cracking. Once the spell was on it way to free Sess, everything became calm. Weird??!! That evil miko is somewhere close wittnessing everything. She wants to see if Sess will get free. Update soon.
person Kimeko
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whats up! I've been whiting for ever, I can't take it any more. Up date please.
This ftory is off the wall I need to read more. Five stars, a big 10. What else do
you need to hear.
person DelKaidin
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yea Ras-ma-taz is at it again... Doing what she does best
write. LOVED the chapter. Can't wait for 39 & 40 and any that
come after!

As for my muse... oh she came back from her long vacation
in tip top shape... Now if I can convince her to work on the
stories that are unfinished... But going to work on Hello Again
while it's fresh.