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for Captive Soul

by Strawberries

person rin chan sesshys angel
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh myat fat ficky!!1 i want to read more i cant wait for the rest* trys to wait pateintly but cant* *sighs* i wish sesshy was truely mine like the way you write him cuz he sounds so great *looks dreamily* i cant wait !
rin-chan sesshys angel(the one and only...lol)
person Reiku
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Teehee. Thanks for the answer! Seriously I really didn't want to know, but I just had to ask. I don't know if that ever happens to you. For a Sess/Rin pairing this isn't too bad. I mit hit hasn't alerted my ick meter which is good. Probably because Sesshoumaru in this story, did not raise Rin from a little girl. I am fairly offended by the traditional Sess/Rin pairings in which he goes from father/brother/guardian/weird uncle with a pet toad, to husband/lover.. I'm rambling.. anyways in this instance the Sess/Rin thing is okay.=)
person tigers_eye
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved new chapter. You are just too damn good as this; it's worth waiting for your updates; you have an excellent style.
person Riomi
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ras,

YAY!!!! You updated! I was gettin worried there...lol

I love this new chappie, the way you express everyone's perception of the situations from every angle ...its inspiring...lol

But it was kinda evil to just leave us hanging at the end... wait not kinda...it is evil that u left us hangin' like that.

Oh well, just makes us want more... hurry and update Kay'?

BTW: PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE at least try to find a way for him to have chibi Sesshou-kun's...*sniffle*
I probably wont stop beggin til you actually do it....lol

Aww well

Riomi
person snowcat
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Ricky" is sooo happy now that "Lucy" has an update to read, she may even stop driving him LOCO trying to sneak stage appearances at the Cabana! Thanks LA VIVA LOCA!
person DelKaidin
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
RAS!!!
You are so crusin'.... now I have to wait till SATURDAY??? Come on be a sport...
Tomorrow???
person New Fan
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bless you my child you updated ^__^. You made my night. This is getting to be to good to not know what is next. Trust me I will be looking for chapter 40 Saturday morning. Read you on Saturday.
person dragonflyelj
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG Ras is the most EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL AUTHORESS EVER!!!!!!!!!!!! did I mention EVIL? What a cliffy! Oh man, now I am sitting here like what the hell!? what slithered? did she get the collar off? is Sess ok? is Inu Yasha ok, will they be able to bring Rin back from the living death or coma that she slipped into? and did anything happen to Kagome? AHHHH!!!! I can't take it anymore, did you update yet? damn! sigh. Well, it is a sign that you are good, ne? ok, Ras, the evil author, I will review you later! ^_-

Huggles,
dragonflyelj
person leishkychan
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey i love your fanfic is really interesting!!!!
So update soon!!!! please !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
me wanna know more!!!!!
person drake220
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok, not to scare you or anything but i will strangle you if you keep on doing this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ARGH!!!! enough with the cliffys!!! i cant handle much more of this!!!!!!! i love sessy-chan in this fic BTB. you nailed his inner personality (or at least i think so) update soon! i'm begging you!!!