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for Captive Soul

by Strawberries

person New Fan
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How could you. Another cliffy. Evil, just plan evil ^__-. When will we see the dark miko. I know she is behind this.
I hope that you update early this week. The suspense is killing me. ^__^.
person rin-chan sesshys angel
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my kami i think i am going to cry .....Well i am crying....i never cried over a fic before..which means this is a total Bad area to leave a cliffy in *sniffles* PLZ write more soon!!
Ps: GREAT STORY!!!
rin-chan sesshys angel ( the one and only ^.^)
person pianita
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on writing such a in-depth story. I had read your previous story "Captured soul" and always wondered what would have happen to our hero. I wonder now if you are planning to bring the Liana and son story.....Would Kouga be involved in their protection somehow? Thank you for deoting the time to Sesshoumaru.
person Sai Orlianna
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM

;-; ::sniff:: ,, MUST MAK MAKE IT SO DIFFICULT!!!! ;-; Did not see that coming...You are officially the Queen of Cliffy's, ne? Anyway you can get the next chapter out in less than a week?
person Leiliiani
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AARRRGG!! Damnable place for a cliffy! Damnable! **deep, cleansing breaths** Ok... I'm alright now...
*sobs* poor Rin! Poor Sesshoumaru! Please please PLEASE have everything turn out ok? Ok?? *sniffles*
person Naheta
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you know lol i am sitting on the edge of my chair and dam near fell out when you stoped. Great chap lol


Naheta
person Kawool
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo 250 reviews !!! You go girl !
Well i'm just fond of your fics and this one rocks!!!
Can't wait to read MORE ^-^
Huggles & hope to talk to ya soon on WooHoo

Kawool,
person KhellendrostheDragon
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ras...*deer in headlights* What happened to Rin?? I hope she's not dead.Whoa...Sesshy's free of the collar...and there's an evil presence in the air...omgck..ck...the suspense is gonna kill me...

Until next time, Huggles;
Khell
person Sai Orlianna
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM

AAAAAHHH!!!! What happens? ;-; Are they all right? I guees I'll wait and see tomorrow. I love this story, it is great. I love Sess/Rin and the d Ind InuYahsa/Kagome stuff. ^_^ Keep it up.
person Mija
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg that was an intense chapter Ras I loveeeeed it...but biting nails here..whats happening??? is Rin ok?? is Sesshy ok?? is he free?? the mean withcy Miko is not back is she??? omg omg must know cant wait for you update please update soon k?? ty ty ty again awsome chap..huggles and smiles your friend and fan Mija..:-)