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for Captured Soul

by Strawberries

person Anyanka
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.. I dunno.. this is just too distrubing for my tastes.. especially since I know it won't end happily. I knew this was dark but jeez.. I prolly won't read any more of this story. that said. This is a great work, you've set the mood very well, I'm enjoying the sequel to this very much which says a lot because I loathe Sess/Rin pairings..heh
person Danni :)
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
haha! U updated so fast~~ happy~~ :P
but also feel sad that the story will end so soon.:P
Thinking abt writing the 3rd story ? Hopefully you will~~ :D
person SanosLilRebelGurl
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update on the other Captive Soul story soon. This one was really goo too. Hope u update soon.
person Mija
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sheeshy's baby is not going trvivrvive???????? (sniffles loudly) pooooooooor Sheeshy this is definitly going to piss him off royally...ooh poor Sheeshy whats he going to do??? that witch wont let him save his and Liana's pup...(sniffles again) poor sheesh please please update soon, and update the other one too kk?? the one with Rin??? pretty please???? ty..:-)
person Danni :)
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hope the story won't end here. haha! :P
I am a big sess fan and really enjoying reading kind of fanfics that sess is being dominated by somebody.:P Esp the yaoi ones! I feel sess is strong outside but he is also quite sensitive and can be easily hurt emotionally~~just like a child~~:P haha!
Pls update this one~~ and maybe~~ haha you should try some yaoi~~ the story must be great under your hands~~

Danni :D :P :)
person pratz
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
man! Ras, i don't know that you're Strawberry here! well, i think about this when he's going to take rin's innocent SOMEDAY on 'captive soul'. God... you'd broken him too deep... *sigh*
person Mija
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg i luved this chapter as well...cant wait to find out if Pandora finds out and what she will do, shes not very nice and i hate whats shes done to poor Shesshy..please update soon??? great fic..:-)
person Tyfani-chan
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
heyz, great first chappy. onto chap 2 ^_~ bai for now!

~*Tyfani-chan*~
person Mija
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
(sniffles) pooooooooooooooor sheeshy...:-(............great story i luv it although sad i truelly liked it
person Tatoosh
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Great lemon, very tender love scene. So nice of Sess to show so compassion and restraint. But now I'm worried even more about them. Pandora isn't a nice person and I doubt she will take kindly to this. I'll have my fingers crossed that she never finds out.