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by Meiu

person apassino
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was really getting into this story until it stopped all of a sudden! Are you going to finish?

Amiti
person Mune_no_Monogatari
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope to see you update soon. I think you haven't updated for a while now. Hope it will be soon.
person Baka no Bouzu
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw..you got to update soon! I've seen this story on another site that I'm on. I forget what it's called at the moment, but I was hoping that you had updated the first chapter here... but you hadn't ;_; Which left me utterly heartbroken.

In other words, Please. Update soon.

Although I think it would have been cool if Kohaku and Sango would have chased Miroku out of town ^_^;
person Tsunami
schedule July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! WRITE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! This story really intregue (sp?) me! It has a great plot and is well written! I can't wait for the next chapter!
person kaye
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So can I make a guess, like they finished the jewel and somehow got their memories erased of Naraku and everything. And these visions are actually flashbacks? Am I even close to being correct? Am I even playing the same game here? Hehe, I liit, it, even if that speculation is wrong. I think the length was fine, I liked it. Update iu mau may.
person Elf From Space
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. You definitely have my attention and I await to see where this leads to. Nicely written too, which makes it easier to read ^_^
person RekkaShinen
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!! I like how you keep having these little flashbacks. Keep it up!! I wanna read more when you get it out. I'm gonna be one of your biggest reviewers. Everytime a few new chapters get out. My name will pop up. Until then. Ja!! ^.~ v
person raving lunitic
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What's going on?!?! Hope you update soon or I'll go NUTS!!! And I'm not talking about ...shutingup. Anyway, I love this fic so far, please don't abandon it, so many orphan fics in the world *pulls out "save the children add, marks out the words* *offical voice "for only some money every day, you can save a fic. Sitting on your compiter chair, not mowing the lawn or getting any sun, you, yes YOU can save a poor, orphaned fiction. Hopefully not this fic. Or I may need to track down the author. KEEP IT UP!!

bye~
person hakuryuu
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! Awesome... but I was wondering as to your footnote, is this the first one? ^^ Thanks a bunch, and great story! Please keep it up!